(General Fiction/W.I.P Pre-Alpha Stage) Yet another UHC fanfic + pitch dossier

[halcyonlioness]

Good lord, am I nervous.

First off, a thank you to the kind person (I won't drop names, but you know who you are) who pointed me this direction.  I am most appreciative. :D

Anyways, I come seeking consultation.  At the risk of sounding like a broken record (I reiterate this in the links below,) there's a lot of stuff I don't know, and I'd love to have a few 'experts' whom I can 'annoy' for information and assistance.  It's this particular fan community I wish to write this fanfic for, and I want to give this project due diligence.
 

Fanfic Pitch Dossier - Please read this first.  Warning: Massive Wall of Text (chances are, you guys can handle it. <3) Edit: Don't panic.  This is just preparation.  Thank you.

Work-In-Progress Document - [Warning: Unfinished Fanfic! There May Be Spoilers!]
Update: Prologue Beta is completed, more or less.  Please let me know what you think and don't be afraid to offer suggestions. Thank you for the help so far, guys! :D

So, I kindly ask that instead of tomatoes, please throw me a few bones to work with.  I look forward to your suggestions and help, and all of you have my thanks in advance.

-HalcyonLioness

Comments

[halcyonlioness]

That's going to go a long way. :D
Thanks for the input!

EDIT: I might want a little more to work with for MCgamer. Having a little comedy play off his love for lapis just isn't enough, you know what I mean?

[guiltyshirts]

No problem. :)

Ah, our MC. Sometimes a bit scatterbrained and exciteable but very mature for his age, always wanting to help other people (he does a lot for charity). Despite usually flailing around a bit, he's actually very good in a fight, and loyal to the people who stick by him. Has something of a comfortable domestic streak, in a group he'll be the one gathering food, making beds and making sure everyone eats. (Cobblehaters is the best example of this). Looooooves anything to do with the Zelda series and has an almost encyclopeadiac knowledge of them (could subststute well as some kind of eclectic research).

Oh, additional: his name is Matthew, but he prefers MC.

If you want something to make you laugh and get some pretty good insight for MC and Millbee, check out 'Orange Wool' if you haven't seen it.

[halcyonlioness]

Yay! Inpuut! /johnny5reference

Thanks, again! *keyboard clatter*

[guiltyshirts]

Hee, you're welcome. :D

*sudden nostalgia because I haven't seen that movie in freakin' years*