The Slap - Prompt Swap (for kappa77)
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mindcrackloveLate, late, late, once again, late. But this time I have a valid excuse!
Band camp... The pain never ends, even when we're off for the weekend...
I wish this could be longer, but I started running out of ideasand ships I like. I also want to get this out before I RETURN to band camp next week, because then this prompt will NEVER get released. -_-
The prompt is: "Some/all of the Mindcrackers participate in this thing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ninOz5ValUM [The Slap]"
Anyways, hope you enjoy!
P.S. I have no idea what kind of drugs made me add the girl in this
The MindCrackers didn't know what to think. One moment they were going about their normal lives, and the next moment, they were in a blank room, face to face with a strange girl wearing a raccoon hat and holding an iPad.
Nebris was the first to speak up. "Um, who are you? And why are we here?"
The girl shrugs and replies. "This is what they want, and that involves you guys. And gal."
"They?" Vechs seemed baffled. "Who's 'they'?"
"That's not important at the moment." She rolled her eyes. "Just listen, and everything will be back to normal in ti-"
"Why us?" This time it was BTC speaking. "What business is important enough to just pluck us out of the time-space continuum?" The other MindCrackers started to get rowdy.
"Sh sh, you hear that?" She put her arm around BTC's neck and waved her hand around the space and then whispered, "It's the armadaaaaaaa."
BTC raised an eyebrow beneath his mask. "The what?"
"You know what?" The girl paced back to her original spot and tapped some things on her iPad. "This'll make things much easier."
All the sudden, all the MindCracker's minds went blank. After some hesitation, BTC shook his head and faced the girl. "What do you need us to do?"
Vechs and Aureylian
"So lemme get this straight." Vechs and Aureylian stood facing the girl who was leading through a summoned studio window. "All we have to do is slap each other?"
The girl nodded. "Uhuhhhhhh."
Vechs groaned: "Do we have to do this? I don't like hurting people." He side glanced at Aureylian but quickly looked away.
"Yes, you have to do this. I don't got all day, the other MindCrackers are waiting." She set down her iPad and shook her fist. "Do it for the armada!"
"But- But what about-"
“Look, you wanna get this over with or not? This is gonna happen one way or another.”
Vechs hesitated for about a minute and finally submitted. “Ok fine...”
Aureylian looked pumped. “We’re ready!”
The girl nodded in satisfaction. "Alright, go in 3, 2, 1!"
Vechs faced Aureylian, nervous. "Ok, here it goes!" He shakily lifted up his right hand. "I'm… I'm gonna slap ya! As haaaaard as I can!"
Aureylian rolled her eyes. "Just do it you big baby!"
Vechs whimpered and lightly tapped her face. "Ok, I did it! Your tur-"
He was caught off guard as Aureylian whipped up her hand and smacked him as hard as possible. Vechs recoiled, holding the side of his cheek as he readjusted his hat and goggles. "Ow!" He started to make whimpering noises.
Aureylian was giggling the entire time
"Owwww!" He made a pouty face at Aureylian. “Why- Why did you do that?” He then made a puppy face. “I need a hug.”
She giggled and said caustically, “I thought you were manly enough to handle that.”
“Aw, come on! It’s not like I’m some heartless mapper who wants all my victims to die in a fire.”
Aureylian chuckled and gave him a hug. She also gave him a light peck on the cheek when they broke apart, earning some ‘bat squeaks’ from the evil overlord.
She excitedly faced the girl, who was typing something on the iPad. “That was fun! Can I do it again?”
Vechs looked up. “Wait, what?”
BTC and Pakratt
“There is NO WAY that I’m being ABDUCTED,” ranted BTC, who had his arms crossed and glared at the girl in the window. “JUST to SLAP someone I could’ve SLAPPED a long time ago if I wanted, and doing it for ENTERTAINMENT PURPOSES!”
The girl had her forehead in her hands and sighed. They’ve been at this for 20 minutes minimum, and finally she put her serious voice on. “Listen, Mr. Cat Blob.”
“Mr. Cat Blob?”
“I know a lot of things, Blame. And one thing I DO know is that at this rate, neither of us will accomplish anything today if I waste my time with you. If you WANT you and your friends to go back, you will have to do this.”
“Accomplish? How does slapping someone accompli-”
“BLAME!”
“If I were to object,” Pak said, his hand tentatively raised, “why do I have to be paired up with HIM of all people? If there’s one thing I know, he’s got a strong hand.”
“Yeah, listen to him!” BTC motioned to Pak. “This is completely stupid.”
The girl just glared at him.
BTC rolled his eyes. “You’re not going to give up, are you?”
“I could say the same to you.”
BTC groaned for a very long time. “Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine.”
The girl sighed a sigh of relief. “Gosh dang finally!”
Pak whimpered. “But- But- But- Why me?”
“Come on, Pak. This’ll be over in just a minute,” BTC said as he removed his gloves and mask. “Hope your face is as flabby is it looks,” he bantered.
Despite being faced with a trained veteran about to slap him, Pak couldn’t help but laugh at that one. “Ok, you can go first.”
“Naw, you go first.” BTC was cracking his knuckles, purposefully scaring Pak.
Pak jumped from toe to toe and inhaled deeply, as if preparing for a boxing match. He swing his arm around like a windmill, gaining momentum, and finally WAMMED BTC right in the face!
BTC kept the same expression, relatively unaffected.
“Oh no…”
BTC grinned, walked up to Pak, and slapped him enough to send him to the floor, grovelling for air.
“Owwwwwwwwwww!” BTC put a foot onto the fallen Pak and stood in a heroic pose.
“I, Blame The Controller, have conquered the PAK!!”
Pak groaned in agony.
“But seriously. You ok?”
Pak wheezed out something about his nose being broken and a doctor.
Etho and Nebris
The girl was incredibly surprised at how much Etho and Nebris were up to slapping each other. She watched them as they both glared at eachother, making hand motions that basically screamed of You’re going dooown or I’d be shocked if you survived after I’m done with ya.
They stood off for a long time before she finally interjected. “Ok, you guys gonna slap each other or what?”
They ignored her. Nebris spoke, “First one to flinch wins.”
Etho narrowed his eyes. “Challenge accepteeeeeeeeeeed.”
“Ready?”
“Set.”
“GO,” they said simultaneously, and thus the slapping began.
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
After for what seemed like hours, Etho recoiled and held his cheek. “Hey!”
Nebris jumped and did a fistpump of justice in the air. “Yes, I win!”
“That’s no fair,” Etho retorted. “You hit me with your knuckles!”
Nebris wiggled his finger. “Tisk tisk, I won fair and square!”
Etho turned to the girl. “Did he, or did he NOT just use his knuckles?”
The girl shrugged, but was too busy laughing for a real response.
Etho turned back to Nebris who had a smug grin on his face. “Rematch, now!”
The girl did some taps on her iPad. “This stuff is golden!”
Band camp... The pain never ends, even when we're off for the weekend...
I wish this could be longer, but I started running out of ideas
The prompt is: "Some/all of the Mindcrackers participate in this thing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ninOz5ValUM [The Slap]"
Anyways, hope you enjoy!
The MindCrackers didn't know what to think. One moment they were going about their normal lives, and the next moment, they were in a blank room, face to face with a strange girl wearing a raccoon hat and holding an iPad.
Nebris was the first to speak up. "Um, who are you? And why are we here?"
The girl shrugs and replies. "This is what they want, and that involves you guys. And gal."
"They?" Vechs seemed baffled. "Who's 'they'?"
"That's not important at the moment." She rolled her eyes. "Just listen, and everything will be back to normal in ti-"
"Why us?" This time it was BTC speaking. "What business is important enough to just pluck us out of the time-space continuum?" The other MindCrackers started to get rowdy.
"Sh sh, you hear that?" She put her arm around BTC's neck and waved her hand around the space and then whispered, "It's the armadaaaaaaa."
BTC raised an eyebrow beneath his mask. "The what?"
"You know what?" The girl paced back to her original spot and tapped some things on her iPad. "This'll make things much easier."
All the sudden, all the MindCracker's minds went blank. After some hesitation, BTC shook his head and faced the girl. "What do you need us to do?"
Vechs and Aureylian
"So lemme get this straight." Vechs and Aureylian stood facing the girl who was leading through a summoned studio window. "All we have to do is slap each other?"
The girl nodded. "Uhuhhhhhh."
Vechs groaned: "Do we have to do this? I don't like hurting people." He side glanced at Aureylian but quickly looked away.
"Yes, you have to do this. I don't got all day, the other MindCrackers are waiting." She set down her iPad and shook her fist. "Do it for the armada!"
"But- But what about-"
“Look, you wanna get this over with or not? This is gonna happen one way or another.”
Vechs hesitated for about a minute and finally submitted. “Ok fine...”
Aureylian looked pumped. “We’re ready!”
The girl nodded in satisfaction. "Alright, go in 3, 2, 1!"
Vechs faced Aureylian, nervous. "Ok, here it goes!" He shakily lifted up his right hand. "I'm… I'm gonna slap ya! As haaaaard as I can!"
Aureylian rolled her eyes. "Just do it you big baby!"
Vechs whimpered and lightly tapped her face. "Ok, I did it! Your tur-"
He was caught off guard as Aureylian whipped up her hand and smacked him as hard as possible. Vechs recoiled, holding the side of his cheek as he readjusted his hat and goggles. "Ow!" He started to make whimpering noises.
Aureylian was giggling the entire time
"Owwww!" He made a pouty face at Aureylian. “Why- Why did you do that?” He then made a puppy face. “I need a hug.”
She giggled and said caustically, “I thought you were manly enough to handle that.”
“Aw, come on! It’s not like I’m some heartless mapper who wants all my victims to die in a fire.”
Aureylian chuckled and gave him a hug. She also gave him a light peck on the cheek when they broke apart, earning some ‘bat squeaks’ from the evil overlord.
She excitedly faced the girl, who was typing something on the iPad. “That was fun! Can I do it again?”
Vechs looked up. “Wait, what?”
BTC and Pakratt
“There is NO WAY that I’m being ABDUCTED,” ranted BTC, who had his arms crossed and glared at the girl in the window. “JUST to SLAP someone I could’ve SLAPPED a long time ago if I wanted, and doing it for ENTERTAINMENT PURPOSES!”
The girl had her forehead in her hands and sighed. They’ve been at this for 20 minutes minimum, and finally she put her serious voice on. “Listen, Mr. Cat Blob.”
“Mr. Cat Blob?”
“I know a lot of things, Blame. And one thing I DO know is that at this rate, neither of us will accomplish anything today if I waste my time with you. If you WANT you and your friends to go back, you will have to do this.”
“Accomplish? How does slapping someone accompli-”
“BLAME!”
“If I were to object,” Pak said, his hand tentatively raised, “why do I have to be paired up with HIM of all people? If there’s one thing I know, he’s got a strong hand.”
“Yeah, listen to him!” BTC motioned to Pak. “This is completely stupid.”
The girl just glared at him.
BTC rolled his eyes. “You’re not going to give up, are you?”
“I could say the same to you.”
BTC groaned for a very long time. “Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine.”
The girl sighed a sigh of relief. “Gosh dang finally!”
Pak whimpered. “But- But- But- Why me?”
“Come on, Pak. This’ll be over in just a minute,” BTC said as he removed his gloves and mask. “Hope your face is as flabby is it looks,” he bantered.
Despite being faced with a trained veteran about to slap him, Pak couldn’t help but laugh at that one. “Ok, you can go first.”
“Naw, you go first.” BTC was cracking his knuckles, purposefully scaring Pak.
Pak jumped from toe to toe and inhaled deeply, as if preparing for a boxing match. He swing his arm around like a windmill, gaining momentum, and finally WAMMED BTC right in the face!
BTC kept the same expression, relatively unaffected.
“Oh no…”
BTC grinned, walked up to Pak, and slapped him enough to send him to the floor, grovelling for air.
“Owwwwwwwwwww!” BTC put a foot onto the fallen Pak and stood in a heroic pose.
“I, Blame The Controller, have conquered the PAK!!”
Pak groaned in agony.
“But seriously. You ok?”
Pak wheezed out something about his nose being broken and a doctor.
Etho and Nebris
The girl was incredibly surprised at how much Etho and Nebris were up to slapping each other. She watched them as they both glared at eachother, making hand motions that basically screamed of You’re going dooown or I’d be shocked if you survived after I’m done with ya.
They stood off for a long time before she finally interjected. “Ok, you guys gonna slap each other or what?”
They ignored her. Nebris spoke, “First one to flinch wins.”
Etho narrowed his eyes. “Challenge accepteeeeeeeeeeed.”
“Ready?”
“Set.”
“GO,” they said simultaneously, and thus the slapping began.
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
Slap
After for what seemed like hours, Etho recoiled and held his cheek. “Hey!”
Nebris jumped and did a fistpump of justice in the air. “Yes, I win!”
“That’s no fair,” Etho retorted. “You hit me with your knuckles!”
Nebris wiggled his finger. “Tisk tisk, I won fair and square!”
Etho turned to the girl. “Did he, or did he NOT just use his knuckles?”
The girl shrugged, but was too busy laughing for a real response.
Etho turned back to Nebris who had a smug grin on his face. “Rematch, now!”
The girl did some taps on her iPad. “This stuff is golden!”
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Date: Sunday, August 2nd, 2015 04:13 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: Sunday, August 2nd, 2015 04:50 pm (UTC)this was a fabulous fic, sub
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Date: Sunday, August 2nd, 2015 05:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Sunday, August 2nd, 2015 05:18 pm (UTC)Cookies for you! (::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)
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Date: Sunday, August 2nd, 2015 05:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Monday, August 3rd, 2015 10:05 am (UTC)Well done! A+
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Date: Monday, August 3rd, 2015 07:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Tuesday, August 4th, 2015 06:28 am (UTC)-the lurkiest lurker
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Date: Sunday, August 9th, 2015 11:31 pm (UTC)Interesting matchups, you have decided on and it's very similar to the original video, in a way. I just wold have wished you would have found a way to keep this 'in their world', instead of bringing a outside force into this to make them do it.
Like, I don't know...a conversation about how someone was hit by someone once; which starts a discussion and an agreement to compare among each other...or something.
As it was, there was no reason to be invested as a reader, which is sad =(
However, you did say you were under a time limit and I know first hand how that can chip away at ones writing a lot.
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Date: Monday, August 10th, 2015 01:03 am (UTC)And I don't know about this being a reoccurring prompt. I've only discovered this website since Christmas. I sometime need to invest some time and read some of the older fics.
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Date: Monday, August 10th, 2015 01:23 am (UTC)