Knock knock
Tuesday, June 2nd, 2015 05:37 pmHey guys Bubbles here! This was something I wrote a while ago, it's kinda short. By the way I'm gonna try to post something everyday for a while because why not, plus I just got out of school for the summer!!! That's all
BYE!!!! :)
Vechs' POV
I was on my way to Aurey's house. We have been dating for almost 2 years. I love her so much. I nervously rub the ring box in my pocket.
I get to her door and knock. She answers not long after.
"Hi Aurey, you look amazing." I say.
She really did though.
"Hi Vechsy, you ready to go?"
"Yup" I say and intertwine our fingers.
Me and Aurey make our way to a fancy restaurant. The waiter seats us. We talk some while we eat. After we finish we make our way to the nearby park.
I lead Aurey to a bench. It is a little dark out but the street light is providing just enough light.
"Knock knock" I say
"Who's there?" Aurey asks giggle looking slightly confused
"Marry"
"Marry who?"
"Marry me" I say and get down on one knee and pull out the ring box. The ring has a diamond surrounded by smaller rainbow gems.
Aurey puts her hand over her mouth and has tears in her eyes.
"Yes of course!" she finally says before kissing me.
I finally pull away and slip the ring onto her finger.
"I love you so much Aurey" I say with tears in my eyes
"I love you too Vechs" Aurey replies.
BYE!!!! :)
Vechs' POV
I was on my way to Aurey's house. We have been dating for almost 2 years. I love her so much. I nervously rub the ring box in my pocket.
I get to her door and knock. She answers not long after.
"Hi Aurey, you look amazing." I say.
She really did though.
"Hi Vechsy, you ready to go?"
"Yup" I say and intertwine our fingers.
Me and Aurey make our way to a fancy restaurant. The waiter seats us. We talk some while we eat. After we finish we make our way to the nearby park.
I lead Aurey to a bench. It is a little dark out but the street light is providing just enough light.
"Knock knock" I say
"Who's there?" Aurey asks giggle looking slightly confused
"Marry"
"Marry who?"
"Marry me" I say and get down on one knee and pull out the ring box. The ring has a diamond surrounded by smaller rainbow gems.
Aurey puts her hand over her mouth and has tears in her eyes.
"Yes of course!" she finally says before kissing me.
I finally pull away and slip the ring onto her finger.
"I love you so much Aurey" I say with tears in my eyes
"I love you too Vechs" Aurey replies.
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Date: Tuesday, June 2nd, 2015 11:10 pm (UTC)That knock knock joke was just so fricking adorable <3
My tip of the day is to maybe try and add some more description into what you write, as to further envelop your reader into your story. :)
You have a really unique way of writing, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Date: Wednesday, June 3rd, 2015 01:02 am (UTC)