The Portal Chapter 3
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Vechs felt hollow, numb, 'Guude had died he must have right? Why Guude why did he have to die?' Feeling depressed he slid down the wall the cold wall, it offering no comfort. Looking up he saw similar reactions on the other mindcrackers faces.
"Why did that have to happen! You are horrible you stupid, evil thing! Why did you kill Guude" MC shouted flinging his arms up in frustration. "It's ok just calm down MC." Nebris whispered, slinging his arm around MC's back and continuing to whisper in his ear.
"ZZzzzz....Well I see you have lost a member of you pathetic group, so sad....zzZZZ" The cracking causing them all to glare in the general direction it was coming from. "ZZzzzz... Ah well your next challenge is a maze, stay in your group....zzzZZZZ"
"I hate that damn voice! A maze now is it! Are you going to kill us off one by one!" Yelled MC not noticing the stares from the others. "I really hate you!" He finished off with glaring at the floor. Nebris continuing to whisper soothingly into his ear.
"Well I personally think that Zisteau and I should lead as we have experience... ya!" Said Etho gesturing to himself and Zisteau.
"Sure why not?" Said Aurey, always the suportive one. "I guess so." Vechs agreed. After they all agreed they started off into the maze, the walls changing into stone as they went along. Forming three groups among themselves, Zisteau and Etho at the front, Vechs and Aurey in the middle, and Nebris and MC at the back.
As we walked in relative silence, punctuated by Zisteau and Etho making decisions of where to turn, and the sound of Nebris and MC murmuring to each-other. 'Walking through these halls was painstakingly hard, and the lack of sound horrible, oh yes I hate it here' Vechs thought, looking around at the horrible stone walls with only crude torches hung for lighting. Never before had he been in such an unappealing place, there was no way any of them had built this.
He felt a breeze on his back and turned around only to hear Nebris and MC scream, having turned a different corner then the rest of the group, disappearing.
Sorry cliffhangers are so fun to write.
Vechs felt hollow, numb, 'Guude had died he must have right? Why Guude why did he have to die?' Feeling depressed he slid down the wall the cold wall, it offering no comfort. Looking up he saw similar reactions on the other mindcrackers faces.
"Why did that have to happen! You are horrible you stupid, evil thing! Why did you kill Guude" MC shouted flinging his arms up in frustration. "It's ok just calm down MC." Nebris whispered, slinging his arm around MC's back and continuing to whisper in his ear.
"ZZzzzz....Well I see you have lost a member of you pathetic group, so sad....zzZZZ" The cracking causing them all to glare in the general direction it was coming from. "ZZzzzz... Ah well your next challenge is a maze, stay in your group....zzzZZZZ"
"I hate that damn voice! A maze now is it! Are you going to kill us off one by one!" Yelled MC not noticing the stares from the others. "I really hate you!" He finished off with glaring at the floor. Nebris continuing to whisper soothingly into his ear.
"Well I personally think that Zisteau and I should lead as we have experience... ya!" Said Etho gesturing to himself and Zisteau.
"Sure why not?" Said Aurey, always the suportive one. "I guess so." Vechs agreed. After they all agreed they started off into the maze, the walls changing into stone as they went along. Forming three groups among themselves, Zisteau and Etho at the front, Vechs and Aurey in the middle, and Nebris and MC at the back.
As we walked in relative silence, punctuated by Zisteau and Etho making decisions of where to turn, and the sound of Nebris and MC murmuring to each-other. 'Walking through these halls was painstakingly hard, and the lack of sound horrible, oh yes I hate it here' Vechs thought, looking around at the horrible stone walls with only crude torches hung for lighting. Never before had he been in such an unappealing place, there was no way any of them had built this.
He felt a breeze on his back and turned around only to hear Nebris and MC scream, having turned a different corner then the rest of the group, disappearing.
Sorry cliffhangers are so fun to write.
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Date: Friday, September 26th, 2014 09:58 pm (UTC)Also don't say sorry about cliffhangers, they are awesome!
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Date: Friday, September 26th, 2014 10:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Friday, September 26th, 2014 11:55 pm (UTC)