New Love - Part 1

[purple_penguins]

Hi there, I'm P and I'm new to this community >.<

I've seen that there is an unfortunate lack of Aurey/Etho ship (probably because they don't even really collab together...), so I've decided to try my hand at writing my own. I apologize in advance for my writing skills not being very strong. I'm new to this world of shipping, and I hope writing will be just as fun as reading has been.

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Part 1:

"Sigh, Vechs is late yet again. I really should buy him a watch or something," Aurey shakes some crusty dirt off of her shoe. She had just walked the 300 block trip all the way back to spawn from FarmVille, and is leaning against Zisteau's mini map wall waiting for Vechs to arrive. He had told her to meet him at spawn as they were supposed to continue working on the road construction, but with the day turning to dusk, it seems as though the project will have to wait for another day.

"I guess he got caught up in some other business, time to head back to the barn for the night then," she was about to pack up her pickaxe and head out when it started to pour. "Of course, just when this day was looking fantastic," Aurey exclaimed with a sarcastic tone. The road home would be dark and muddy, not the most fun trip.

A slight tap on her shoulder makes Aurey jump a little. She turns around to see the gleeful face of a sneaky ninja. "What are you doing sitting here in the rain?" Etho asks her. His warm face gives Aurey an affectionate sensation, but she quickly dismisses it.

"Oh uh, I was supposed to meet Vechs here, but I guess he got busy with something else," Aurey explains. Thunder is rumbling throughout the server. It's dark and mobs were starting to appear on the outside of the spawn city.

"Oh, If you're not doing anything, how about we get out of this rain and head back to my tree house*?" Etho offers with a pleasant smile. Aurey blushes and gives a nod to agree with him.

Etho pulls out an umbrella and offers it out to Aurey as the pair walk towards the roofed forest.

*Assuming Etho's Tree House has the leaf canopy

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Well thanks for reading Part 1 of of something I hope to continue. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! (whether it be for my writing, or about this website which I'm still new too >.<)

-P
 

Edit: The anonymous replys are from me :P I forgot to log in haha

Comments

[gottaloverattatta]

Welcome! But you messed up your tag dude! Just change it's placing. Anyways! Welcome! Glad to see new blood!

[purple_penguins]

I think I fixed it now...I kinda freaked out when I saw that I had cut the only thing I wanted left in. Good thing I was able to edit it

[gottaloverattatta]

Well anyways! I'm Ratta and I do a LOT of shipping. And now for advice! (Hate this part.) You checked the rules? FAQ? There's a beta service too if you lack a beta. But anyways. Welcome to the Salad! I hope you enjoy your stay!

[purple_penguins]

Thanks! :D

<3

[gottaloverattatta]

Don't be afraid to ask if you need anything! :D

Smooth operator

[(Anonymous)]

Etho: Hey guuuuuurrrrllll wanna head back to my tree-house?

[its_catbug]

Oooh interesting pairing :D can't wait to see what you'll do with it! And iirc, Etho and Aurey have done something somewhat together (if him having Aurey and Sev stealing string for him counts, heehee) Anyways, welcome welcome :D

[(Anonymous)]

Ya, I really wished they would do an actually real collab together, I'm just hoping that they get paired in UHC

[(Anonymous)]

*dreamy sigh* perhaps some day in the future :3

[clashofdemonesense]

Hai guy! I love the story! And pretty much any ship at all, so... there's that. But this is a great first chapter! I'll be happily awaiting reading the next one! :3

[tdscott8]

Hey there P, I'm Scott. I mainly do MCGamer one shots and Saladcrack. But there's occasional other stuff of course. =P

If this was your first time writing then bravo, you did an excellent job. The only problem I saw is you used "your" instead of "you're"

Things like that are commonly over looked though, I wish you luck in future projects. =P

[(Anonymous)]

Thanks for the correction :)

(I'm really bad with my your's and my there's lol)

[chemrepnacl]

I am enjoying your description, love your choice of words :D Welcome!

[gummy53]

I actually like this pairing! (Although it goes against my Nebtho and Veylian pairings.) Auretho? Hmm. :)

And also, welcome to the Salad! Make sure you read the FAQ and stuff. :D

[(Anonymous)]

Yea, I really ship Veylian, but since Vechs has his own pig-derp, maybe Etho can fulfill the role...

[spiderskelly13]

Hello! I'm Spiderskelly! I'm known for odd ships as well! (Nebris/Vechs, anyone?)
Hope you have a good time here!