Chapter Five Capture

[freezer7]

Ermagawd! I got inspirational and this!


The door slammed in front of me. It hurt to know that Etho was shutting me out. I went to the room I shared with Vechs. My messy side, Vechs clean.

"Millbees sleeping in here, I can stay on the couch...." Vechs offered.

"No, I'll sleep barn. It's plenty warm." Not leaving him time to reply, I walked down the stairs and outside. I followed the path towards the barn. Pain exploded in the back of my head. I fell to the ground with stars dancing in my eyes. Black edged in on my vision.

"Got you." A man growled. He dragged me towards a huge black horse. Finally, my consciousness slipped.

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My head hurt. My skin hurt. Thinking hurt. Every darn thing hurt! Why did it hurt?? Memory came flooding back. I had been knocked out, and-Red hot pokers filled my mind and I shivered. The Cube had found us.



Tell me watcha think! I know it's uber duber short, but it's better than nothing...

Comments

[fireredlily]

A small suggestion: If you're gonna continue posting chapters while working on multiple fics at the same time (I'm guessing this is for the unnamed story?) then it might be good to change the subject title to a working title and the chapter number.

Right now, your fic posts are really hard to navigate, and I can't find a few of the previous chapters for this story because they're not titled consistently. >_>

Keep it up, the story sounds interesting from the few chapters I've managed to track down. :p

[cooki_cutta]

As a helpful word for ya, I think Ratt posted at least one of the chapters for this. :)

[(Anonymous)]

could you please give links to the previous chapters? Also, more pls :3. I like this story

-shaziru

[freezer7]

Uh, I would prefer not to