Chapter Five Capture
Friday, September 5th, 2014 07:00 amErmagawd! I got inspirational and this!
The door slammed in front of me. It hurt to know that Etho was shutting me out. I went to the room I shared with Vechs. My messy side, Vechs clean.
"Millbees sleeping in here, I can stay on the couch...." Vechs offered.
"No, I'll sleep barn. It's plenty warm." Not leaving him time to reply, I walked down the stairs and outside. I followed the path towards the barn. Pain exploded in the back of my head. I fell to the ground with stars dancing in my eyes. Black edged in on my vision.
"Got you." A man growled. He dragged me towards a huge black horse. Finally, my consciousness slipped.
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My head hurt. My skin hurt. Thinking hurt. Every darn thing hurt! Why did it hurt?? Memory came flooding back. I had been knocked out, and-Red hot pokers filled my mind and I shivered. The Cube had found us.
Tell me watcha think! I know it's uber duber short, but it's better than nothing...
The door slammed in front of me. It hurt to know that Etho was shutting me out. I went to the room I shared with Vechs. My messy side, Vechs clean.
"Millbees sleeping in here, I can stay on the couch...." Vechs offered.
"No, I'll sleep barn. It's plenty warm." Not leaving him time to reply, I walked down the stairs and outside. I followed the path towards the barn. Pain exploded in the back of my head. I fell to the ground with stars dancing in my eyes. Black edged in on my vision.
"Got you." A man growled. He dragged me towards a huge black horse. Finally, my consciousness slipped.
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My head hurt. My skin hurt. Thinking hurt. Every darn thing hurt! Why did it hurt?? Memory came flooding back. I had been knocked out, and-Red hot pokers filled my mind and I shivered. The Cube had found us.
Tell me watcha think! I know it's uber duber short, but it's better than nothing...
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Date: Friday, September 5th, 2014 03:53 pm (UTC)Right now, your fic posts are really hard to navigate, and I can't find a few of the previous chapters for this story because they're not titled consistently. >_>
Keep it up, the story sounds interesting from the few chapters I've managed to track down. :p
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Date: Friday, September 5th, 2014 09:11 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Friday, September 5th, 2014 11:14 pm (UTC)-shaziru
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Date: Friday, September 5th, 2014 11:17 pm (UTC)Uh, I would prefer not to