Streets (5)

[freezer7]

Sorry about the spammyness of this. I just got over excited and went on a writing spree. So here chapter five!


Etho blinked. I let out a sigh of relief. A faint glow came from his eyes. A good choice. Etho was taller now, less than six inches shorter than me. And I was six foot five. His features looked a little sharper, he looked about the age of a eighteen year old even though he was just ten. He would look that way for a long time. Aging had been slowed down for us, it didn't stop, just slowed down. He also looked leaner and tougher.

"Good, your up!" The recovery rooms medic chirped.

"What's his stats James?" James checked his computer.

"Fine, and as good as any Special. Boss is looking for you two." He replied. He preceded to unhook Etho. Etho cringed as he stood up.

"God! It's so loud! Do you always hear like this?" I nodded. I led him outside and towards the Main Building. Boss,or Freezer was her real name, was scary. Cold and harsh, she ran the army. She had been the first Enhanced person. Salt was her second in command, aggressive and loyal to Freezer she was a mean fighter. TheParamedic or James was the best Medic the army possessed. I shoved open the door to Freezes office.

"Yes? Oh it's you two." Salt growled. Her black hair was spun up in a bun and her black eyes glared at us. Uh oh. We were in trouble.

"Nebris! You changed someone without my permission! You will mentor that mistake! You will teach him tech! You will teach him medical! You will show him battle and how to lie!" Freezer spat. I nodded. I had taken a huge step out of line. Her violet eyes were furious as Salt roughly pushed out into the commons.

"Let's head to mess and get some chow." I sighed. Etho nodded, lost in thought. Mess was next to the dorms. We jogged over to it and shoved the rusty doors open.

"Nebs! What can I get ya?" A tall black haired man called. Ratt was the chief chef. His fellow cook, Cooki, hovered awkwardly by his side.

"Taco, and-" I looked down at Etho, which was barely possible.

"Just a water, please" I led him to a table were Allie was sitting with Athell. They looked up as we sit down.

"Nebris! Hi! How are you? Is that Etho? Wait, isn't he dead?" Allie gushed.

"Etho, meet Allie, the chatterbox, and Athell." Allie gave a pouting look while Athell's golden eyes took in Etho.

"Oh, nice to meet you!" Etho looked slightly confused as Allie went on chattering. I'll ask later. Ratt trotted over with our things.

"Hey Ratt! The fried chicken is mine!" Allie yelped as he went to give it to me.

"The taco's mine" I agreed. Ratt looked a bit confused as he gave everyone their respective things.

"Well, I'm on shift, I gotta go make food!" Ratt excused himself.

"I should probably get going too. I have a mission tomorrow." Athell nervously got up and practically ran out the doors.

"Is she always like that..?" Etho asked.

"No, she's just nervous around you. I should go and make sure she's ok, pity we couldn't chat longer! Bye bye!" Allie rushed after Athell.

"We should get going too." I sighed. I finished my taco and walked towards the door. When we got to the dorm I led him to my room.

"Welcome home!" I exclaimed.

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Make sure to tell me what you think down there! :)

Comments

[the_mysterious_m]

That's was the fastest salad crack update ever. COUGHtgezombineerCOUGH. Kind of sad that Johnny wasn't in this but oh well! Anyways, see you next time!

[freezer7]

Hold your horses! You'll be in the chapter when I need your character! I'll try and include you in chapter seven.

[the_mysterious_m]

Can't wait!

[thezombineer]

COUGHOCIUGHsevenCOUGHCOUGH

[freezer7]

COUGHsevenhurryupCOUGH

[the_mysterious_m]

Woah! New pic!

[freezer7]

Yup!

[thezombineer]

I like it!

[freezer7]

Thanks!

[thezombineer]

Yep! :)

[hidgerknight]

I thought Sev recently has Writer's Block, Didn't he?

[freezer7]

I dunno if you talking to me

[hidgerknight]

Its a general question so i'm basically asking everyone what happened to Sev recently.

[freezer7]

I think his computer broke

[hidgerknight]

Dang, well, that's for sure will suck.
I'll PM you something in a bit.

[thezombineer]

I know his computer broke. I don't know about writers block. His phone keyboard apparently doesn't cooperate, though, so that's an excuse.

[the_mysterious_m]

That's a valid excuse in my book. Has he fixed his computer yet?

[thezombineer]

I honestly have no clue. I do know that he has worked on the story a little.

If it's not ready in a few days, i'll cut the planned chapter into a couple parts so that we have something to release. Then when he's finished with his part, I can release the rest. Did that make sense?

[the_mysterious_m]

I didn't know you guys wrote separate parts.

[thezombineer]

Yeah. He's been working on the story arch with Seven. (He wrote the battle with Yuna and the part where he's in his apartment. Now he's writing the aftermath to the Yuna battle.)

I've been doing other cursory stuff, developing/introing characters, preparing for the main story arch of this season. Oh, yeah, it's multi-season now. Long term project. Yay.

We just make sure to line up our writing. And if something doesn't connect directly, I throw something in between. It really is working out well, except for he's not writing quickly:P

[freezer7]

Ugh! I can't wait till the next one!

[thezombineer]

Soon, madam, soon.

[the_mysterious_m]

Oh. Well, you always have someone else to help! *nudge**nudge*

[thezombineer]

More people will probably complicate things. And if I knew where Seven was taking his thing, i'd have it written already :P

[the_mysterious_m]

Good point.

[freezer7]

I would love to help if you need it

[thezombineer]

More people will probably complicate things. And if I knew where Seven was taking his thing, i'd have it written already :P

[freezer7]

Meh, just that thought I would offer

[thezombineer]

Thanks for the offer. I'll let you know if we DO need help :)

[freezer7]

Yeah.. Ima gonna go to bed. Make sure to check out chapter six...

[thezombineer]

Night!

[athell]

Yes! I like where this is going! I can't wait for the next chapter!

[freezer7]

I just finished chapter six!

[athell]

*gasp* Yay!

[freezer7]

And I'm still recovering from it

[athell]

...Should I be scared?

[freezer7]

If you want to be

[chemrepnacl]

Yus I like what you have made me :D

[freezer7]

Awesome!

[gottaloverattatta]

I like my confusion. It suits me. :D

[freezer7]

It does

[theparamedic]

Lovely little chapter, this. Hope more is on the way!

[freezer7]

Yup! I've finished chapter six and am taking a little break

[(Anonymous)]

This is why I hate these stories, cause they end. GJ! - vet anon