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Saturday, August 16th, 2014 10:30 am
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Okay so I got this prompt from theparamedic. I might continue it but no promises. As always comment if I did anything wrong.


Aureylian was walking through the mesa on her way home. When she saw a baby bunny trapped in a pit to bedrock. Someone had left it there to die, the poor thing was skin and bones. She dug a staircase down to him. Once she was down there she picked him up and said, “Aww, aren’t you a cutie. Who would just leave you down here all alone? I’ll take you back to my house, and get you something to eat. That sound good?”

The bunny made a little squeaking noise, and hopped onto Aurey’s shoulder. Aurey squealed and said, “That is so cute, I think I’m going to call you Checkers.”

Aurey then walked back to her house, with Checkers on her shoulder. On the way she ran into Guude, who asked, “Where have you been? I have been looking everywhere for you. What’s with the rabbit?”

“I was at the mesa, that is where I found checkers. Someone had left him in a pit to die! I am taking him to my house to get some food and water.” Aurey responded.

“I’ll come with you.” Guude announced.

They then walked back to Aurey’s house. When they got there Aurey spoke, “Hey Guude, I’m going to go get Checkers some carrots. Do you mind watching him for me?”

“Not at all, go get this little guy some carrots.” Guude replied taking checkers off Aurey’s shoulder.

When Aurey came back she screamed. All her sheep were gone! Still freaking out she yelled, “Guude, what did you do with my sheep?!”

Guude came up from the mines and stopped shocked when he saw that the sheep were gone. After a couple seconds he recovered and said, “Nothing, I swear I have been in the mine with Checkers the whole time! Wait where is he?”

Then they heard a faint squeaking noise coming from behind the chests. Aurey walked over there and moved the chests aside, revealing a terrified Checkers. Aurey picked him up and turned to Guude saying, “First you kill my sheep, then you stuff Checkers in a wall. I-I just can’t. You need to leave now.”

Guude stared at her shocked and said, “But I didn’t do anything!”

“Get out! NOW!” Aurey screamed.

Guude staggered out of the house, confused and upset. He didn’t kill the sheep, and he had no idea who did or even would.

After Guude left Aurey just stared blankly at the empty pens where the sheep used to be. Then she was snapped out of her dase by Checkers, who started squeaking loudly. She turned to him saying softly, “Poor Checkers, I almost forgot about you, here are your carrots.” She gave him the carrots, and continued speaking, “Alright you finish those up I’m going to sleep.”

The next morning Aurey didn’t wake up.

It wasn’t Guude who killed the sheep it was Checkers! Because he was The Killer Rabbit of Caerbannog, and now that he had gotten Aureylian out of the way he was going to take over all of Mindcrack!

His plotting was interrupted when someone knocked at the door. That person called out cheerfully, “Rel Rel, I heard what Guude did to your sheep so I brought you some more.”

Taking over Mindcrack could wait now he was hungry.

Date: Saturday, August 16th, 2014 07:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] clashofdemonesense
Does anyone know how to craft a holy hand grenade Goose? :P

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 05:22 am (UTC)
thezombineer: (Default)
From: [personal profile] thezombineer
Mix a Molotov cocktail with five teaspoons of holy water. Add a bit of Thermite, bless for one hour. :P

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 05:24 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] clashofdemonesense
I love it Shawn. I'm going to go make several

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 05:31 am (UTC)
thezombineer: (Default)
From: [personal profile] thezombineer
I don't know if they work on people. Frankly rabbits are the only confirmed kills using holy hand grenades.

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 05:33 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] clashofdemonesense
Oh well. Arizona has some of the craziest animals, so it's bound to work on something. Plus we have rabbits here, so I'll be on the lookout for a Checkers

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 05:34 am (UTC)
thezombineer: (Default)
From: [personal profile] thezombineer
I ain't never seen no rabbits in Arizona. Youz crazy, man

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 05:37 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] clashofdemonesense
They're all over the damn place, bro! I live backed to the desert, so there's like thousands of them out there

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 05:39 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thezombineer
Well, I was in the middle of Avondale. All I saw were feral cats.

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 06:08 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] clashofdemonesense
I'm in Phoenix, so... for all of you who want to find me, I'm there!

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 07:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thezombineer
A Phoenix that lives in Phoenix, eh?

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 09:32 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] clashofdemonesense
:D of course. Not the reason I picked to be a phoenix though. Phoenixes are just cool and awesome and stuff

Date: Monday, August 18th, 2014 01:52 am (UTC)
thezombineer: (Default)
From: [personal profile] thezombineer
Indeed they are :D

Date: Saturday, August 16th, 2014 08:27 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cooki_cutta
So the bunnies truly are evil... They do have some of the creepiest eyes, so I guess it would make sense. But good job with the story! :)

Date: Saturday, August 16th, 2014 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] chemrepnacl
I felt sad when Aurey died, but my only comment to the ending is "hehe!" this was a rather cute story :D

Date: Saturday, August 16th, 2014 09:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lthomas224
Aww, RIP Aurey. Dang you Caerbannog! I loved this, regardless :D

Date: Sunday, August 17th, 2014 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Vetches! Burn the sheep!

i should be writing the next chapter... have school :(

Date: Sunday, September 7th, 2014 03:47 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] r7
Interesting.... And more in the light, haphazard style that the disco fics were in, rather than the more normal one of Rebellion. I personally like the rebellion one more, but whatever.

(Sorry for the very late reply, I'm doing my giant salad catch-up.)

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