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So my first FanFic.. lets see if I screw up the cuts... or the tags. oh well... also this is really short. also this is a Lords Of Minecraft fic.

“I thought that I would have a better life when i entered that portal…. oh how i was wrong.”


Her eyes fluttered open, the air warm on her skin. The street was crowded; she looked around to see where the crowd was most dense, they all seemed to be squabbling, all pushing their way desperately to the front like a ravenous swarm of One Direction fan girls; a wooden gate standing between them and their prey. Shrieks and squeals ripped through the front of the crowd; people started running in all directions away from the gate some stayed planted where they stood, as the gate rose. That was when she caught sight of.. Them…. ten men stood before her, nine of which wore a golden crown and the tenth standing behind them; eyes wild with excitement.


That was where it started to go downhill, suddenly the people who had not moved to the side of the roads or had run away completely, had shattered into a million specks of red dust as the men advanced forward, one of the older men, who wore no shirt and had a firm grip on a golden sword the glowed purple shouted with all his might “Peasants who wish not to die will move to the side of the road and bow and keep the heads down!” In unison, the people bowed their heads and the people on the road ran without hesitation to join them, all except her who was rooted to the spot her eyes wide open as she looked on in awe as they moved closer but was soon brought to reality as the man was now in front of her, his sword plunged into her stomach, his face bared an unwelcoming expression as she too turned into dust.

EDIT 8/4: Ill post next one tomorrow, also sorry if offended any 1D fans :)

Date: Monday, August 4th, 2014 03:46 pm (UTC)
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You did use the metaphor! Yay!

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