Yelling

[gottaloverattatta]

This is Freezer's second chapter to that series she doesn't have a name for. I'm only posting cause she asked me to. Enjoy!



Vechs POV


Yelling (Vechs POV)

It had been almost sixteen years since we had left the castle. Since then i had learnt that Etho was calm and peaceful. Nebris was always up to something, always. Aureylian was a red haired, green eyed, sweet, animal loving, sixteen year old. Once you reached 18, you stopped aging, so all of us but Aurey looked exactly the same as did sixteen years ago.

"Nebs! Put the door back!" Etho shouted at Nebris, who had broken the front door from its hinges. Aurey rolled her eyes at me. Ethos and Nebris's personalities were constantly clashing.

"I bet they'll end up fighting" I mouthed at her.

"They aren't all ready?" She mouthed back.

"Etho?" Aurey asked sweetly.

"Yes? Nebris.... Fix. That. Door." I laughed at the two men's squabbling.

"I'm fixing the door! No need to yell!" Nebris smirked.

"Etho, could we go to the shooting range?" Aurey continued innocently. She was like a sister to me, but Etho was more like a friend. Nebris was just Nebris. The small house that we lived in was two floors tall with three bedrooms. Me and Nebs shared a room while Etho and Aurey both had separate rooms. The down stairs area was a mess. The clutter of almost sixteen years of four people added up.

"Sure, Nebris you need a welder!" Etho said, glaring down at Nebris. I leaned back onto the counter behind me. Giving up his fight, Etho rolled his eyes and went to get our bows.

"So Aurey... Wanna help with this door here?" Nebris asked. This would only get him into more trouble with Etho, but he was obviously aware of it by the devious light sparking in his eyes.

"Don't do it Rel Rel!" I warned. But being the person she was she offered to help and face the wrath of Etho.

"I'll help you" Aurey sighed. Leaning down to help, Etho came back into the room. Anger flashed on his face as he saw Aurey helping Nebris.

"Vechs, go and get some arrows. But you two stay here." Etho growled through clenched teeth. They were in trouble! Walking down the hall, I ducked into a small closet and snatched four full quivers. I heard muffled yelling and smiled. Nebris deserved it. Coming back to the main room, I saw that it wasn't Etho that was screaming.

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I hope you enjoyed, I know I did. :D

Comments

[the_mysterious_m]

Nice job, Mr. Freeze! Alright, Etho, CHILL.

[gottaloverattatta]

It's actually a Miss Freeze. :D

[the_mysterious_m]

Oh. Oops. Now my batman reference doesn't work... I'm sorry Miss Freeze!

[gottaloverattatta]

Which is a shame. .-.

[r7]

Well done freeze! Story's great, I can't wait for more.

Also, having Ratta upload the chapter was a cool idea to expand your audience!

[gottaloverattatta]

Yeah, that's why It happened... *oddly suspicious voice*

[r7]

Ratta! What have you done to Freeze?

[gottaloverattatta]

No! Nothing! I swear! She's in a car ride...

[clashofdemonesense]

Haha! Etho and Nebris rivalries forever! I love it!

[gottaloverattatta]

I'm sure she'll love to know you guys are enjoying! :D

[lthomas224]

Awesome Freeze!

[gottaloverattatta]

Can't really speak for her. But I'm gonna guess she says thanks!

[blackcobrane]

Nooooo cliffhangers my worst enemy! D:

[gottaloverattatta]

Hehehe! Go Freeze!

[hidgerknight]

I think i coincidentally got the right answer as to why Freeze doesn't write long stories... ._.

[freezer7]

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[freezer7]

Thanks Ratt! I just got back! Thanks to everyone for reading! Have fun with my cliffhanger, hehehehe!

[gottaloverattatta]

Welcome back. I'll be dropping in and out. .-.

[freezer7]

I'm back! :) too bad your kinda busy

[(Anonymous)]

Is the door a reference to the book , "Surely you're Joking Mr. Feynman" ? Or is it just a coincidence?

[gottaloverattatta]

I dunno. Freeze!

[(Anonymous)]

Is Freeze often busy?

[gottaloverattatta]

I'm more the busy one...

[freezer7]

Nope, not a reference!

[gottaloverattatta]

There's the answer! :D