The Freezing Rattattas [SoS]
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mindcrackloveA few days has past since Ratt’s family went into travel again, leaving him home alone. Ratt still felt tired and a bit numb at his hands after typing such lots of stories and posting them in the Salad. He felt his phone vibrating in his pocket. “Now who would that be...” Ratt wondered. He took out his phone and looked at the pending message.
“Ratt, Freeze’s with us in Red’s home, not Red Wolf, but Red “Seven”’s home, if you need us, just go there. –Thomas”. Ratt sighed and replied to them, saying “I think i don’t need people as of right now, my hands hurt after staying up all nighter with Freeze in my house.” Ratt clicked send, and the question is probably the stupidest thing Thomas ever asked.
“What are you doing all night? Playing Minecraft or something?”. Ratt groaned and dropped his head. He sat down on the couch and replied
“Just... Let me go there.”
--Seven’s House—
“Hey Ratt” Thomas greeted.
“You too, Tom.” Ratt answered. It was a storm outside and Ratt went to Tom’s house with just an Umbrella.
“You want some warm tea?” Thomas offered. Rat only shook his head.
“I brought my own.” Ratt took a bottle of hot chocolate and drank it.
“Freeze’s at my room, looking at Etho’s videos, wanna join?” Tom asked. Ratt does not answer and took Tom’s hand to his room. After getting to Tom’s room, which is downstairs, Ratt knocked on the door that’s labeled “Thomas” and footsteps was heard.
“Hold on, Thomas, just gotta-“
“It’s not Thomas, its Ratt.” Ratt cut Freeze off, after Freeze literally opened the door.
“Oh.” Freeze said nonchalantly, and let Ratt and Thomas in.
“Where’s Sev?” Ratt asked.
“He’s out to another town to buy some apparels, and he said we’re allowed to go to his house if we need something with beta or stuff, or if we need food.” Thomas said, pulling a sandwich out. Ratt only stared at him in disbelief. Was Seven that kind to give Tom food? They always show off their food everytime they meet, but now?
“Well... i will probably need food if this is a sleepover day, but after all, What are you doin’ Freeze?” Ratt asked.
“Oh, Um, I finally found the perfect title for the first story now.” Freeze stuttered.
“What’s the title then?” Ratt asked.
“Etho’s Hunt.” Freeze showed him a piece of paper, on it was a hand drawn Etho. “What does that even relate to in the story?” Ratt asked again, this time confused.
“I changed the story to match the Thumbnail, and that’s it, just minor tweaks here and there.” Freeze said, while flipping through the pages
“So, basically you changed the story... Who’s your beta for the story? I know Thomas can’t because he focuses on his other stories too.” Ratt said.
“Seven. He offered help to me so i can write easily without any problems, y’know, i am not that good at writing such long stories, or even series.” Freeze explained.
“So, is it posted on the Salad yet?” Ratt asked.
“No, not just yet.” Seven’s sound was heard from the door. Thomas and Freeze winced when they hear Seven's sound.
“Hey Sev...” Ratt greeted Sev, who is looking at Ratt intently.
“Ratt... who invited you over?” Sev asked Ratt, only to be pointed towards Thomas.
“You said i can invite people over to here.” Thomas evaded.
“Well, true, but if its another Salader... Call me, i don’t approve of this, dude.” Sev glared at Thomas, who only laughed nervously.
“Anyways, Ratt, i beta’d Freeze’s story, and it has some flaws, such as typos, and mostly... No tags.” Seven bluntly stated the quirks that Ratt forgot to type. Ratt then shifted his gaze to Freeze, who is blushing because of the things she forgot to add.
“Eh... Sorry, Ratt.” Freeze sighed. “Well, atleast the story’s complete, now what do we do?” Ratt asked Seven.
“I dunno, both of you guys are teaming, right?” Seven asked, in which Freeze replied with a slight nod. “Okay... now, what will your team name be?” Seven asked.
“Umm, how about the one that David suggested? The “New Adorabolical” one?” Freeze asked, only to get a pinch from Ratt "Ow." She whispered, and elbowed Ratt.
“Wait, how about... Team Underwater Ninja?” Ratt suggested.
"What?" Freeze asked, confused of what Ratt just suggested.
"Well, it's based on our profile pictures." Ratt gestured to their conversation on the PM's.
“Now that’s just subtly from your pictures.” Seven shook at Ratt.
“Ratt, how about Freezing Rattattas?” Thomas asked.
“Well, that’s mundane, but you guys should try that out.” Seven gazed to Ratt, who’s holding his head while saying incomprehensible words.
“Wait, what? I wasn’t listening, but my idea is... Freeze R7.” Ratt grinned.
“Are you mocking me or what?” Seven grumpily asked Ratt.
“No, Freeze’s name in the Salad IS Freezer7, and i guess that relates to something.” Ratt smirked while looking at Freeze sarcastically. Freeze can’t do anything but crosses her hand and bluffs.
“It was just a coincidence, Ratt, no need to mention it again.” Freeze looked at Ratt with disapproval, too bad he mentioned it again in front of a beta.
“Anyways, Freezing Rattattas?” Seven asked. “Sure.” Ratt replied.
“Yesh, thwt wwd be a gwd name.” Thomas mumbled, whilst his mouth is being stuffed with food. Seven turned around to face Thomas and he frowned.
“Tom... don’t finish the last of my Sandwich please, or ever again.” Seven frowned at Thomas.
“Bwt its Delishus...” Thomas said, whilst gulping the munched food.
“Oh, and Seven, thanks for the help.” Ratt patted Seven at the back. “That’s what i do.” Seven slimed a weak one, but he pulled it off.
“Team Freezing Rattattas will be your team name... and Your Motto?” Seven asked.
“Formed in the Clouds, Forged in the Stars, Freezed in the Sky, and Reborn in the Community. Cause we, are saladers.” Freeze said with seriousness in her voice.
“Ooh, nice catch, Freeze.” Seven complimented Freeze. She only smiled and looked at
“Heh, I’m just that Awesome is a nice catch.” Freeze said with suave in her tone. “Meh, you barely even resisted to blush at a sarcastic comment.” Ratt smiled weirdly to Freeze.
“Erhm, Ratt... My Privacy’s still at first level, y’know.” Freeze taunted Ratt.
“Fine.” Ratt sighed and looked back at Seven.
“Team Freezing Rattattas... We Freeze R7’s Everyday.” Ratt joked. Seven only let a small laugh out. He could take a few sarcasm, but if it goes too far, he would rather stay out from the conversation than just getting even moke poked around.
“’Kay, Everything Done here?” Seven asked. “No! I didn’t finish my Sandwich yet!” Thomas exclaimed with chubby cheeks, The Trio looked at Thomas and laughs.
Seven looked at Ratt and said; “I guess the Freezing Rattattas will ‘Freeze’ me with their stories.”
“You Bet!” Ratt and Freeze exclaimed at the same time.
Team Freezing Rattattas, Formed in the Clouds, Forged in the Stars, Freezed in the Sky, and Reborn in the Community. ‘Cause we, are Saladers.
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As Requested by Ratt n’ Freeze, another chapter to the story!
People in the Story :
Freeze (Freezer7)
Ratt (Gottaloverattatta)
Seven (r7)
And Thomas (lthomas224)
Questions :
Q: Who’s Seven? A: r7 (R-Seven)
Q: What’s the motto from? A: Mamakushi Sengoku Terra Gankesu Volume 3, with a few tweaks.
Q: How’d you get the team name? A: The mighty Gottaloverattatta told me about his kingdom... not Kingdom, but Team name.
Q: Freeze Is a She!?!?!? A: ... Yes.
Anyways, this jokey-kinda QnA is going to be weird, so anyways, Constructive Criticism is appreciated, and as always, Enjoy the Story! :D
This Sentence makes 1200 Words. (No longer occur after edited"
Edit: Fixed the Spacings between the sentences, credit to r7 for beta-ing my story indirectly.
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Date: Tuesday, July 29th, 2014 07:22 am (UTC)I do!
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Date: Tuesday, July 29th, 2014 07:32 am (UTC)Nope, phone is cheap. No internet. :(
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Date: Tuesday, July 29th, 2014 07:39 am (UTC)I never thought I'd have to say it, but I think I'm a bit OOC... Meh, who cares, it's fine.
And because I am now in this thing, I am officially volunteering Clash for this thing! Because I need a teammate too.
As a sidenote, I think it is always best if you say who said something. It reduces confusion and makes it obvious who is talking. Ex:
"blahblahblah" Freeze muttered, looking down slightly.
Another good rule of thumb is whenever a new person talks, their quote should start a new paragraph. Ex:
"Yeah, so?" Ratta asked indignantly, glaring at Thomas. His posture was slightly off, figiting and bouncing on his heels nervously.
"Well, it is S-to-S." Clash replied mockingly, continuing to tease the two with Seven.
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