Arrows

Sunday, July 27th, 2014 08:11 pm
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I shall be evil. You shall feel the feels like never before.
Muahahahaha!!!






"Vechs?" Aurey asked, looking at his green goggles that coved his wonderful blue eyes. She was standing outside the door to his lair.

"What? I don't want company, I'm b- oh, errr, hi?" Vechs began to yell before he noticed it was Aurey. Aurey, proffered a huge basket of torches.

" here you are good sir!"

"Thanks?" Aurey smiled and thought 'he doesn't remember!'.

" Why, Vechs, it's Christmas!" Aurey exclaimed. A surprised look cross Vechs face, as if had forgotten.

"It is? Rel Rel! You remembered! Ah yes! The torches!" Vechs exclaimed happily. Glad Vechs had remembered, she handed the basket over to him.

"I forgot, to be truthful. I was working on project rainbow when you knocked! Would you like to eat some cake? Zisteau just pranked me by putting cake everywhere!" He offered.

"I would love to!" She smiled. Vechs some what proudly smiled.

"Bow, arrows, sword, and other weapons in the chest!" Vechs ordered. Reluctantly Aurey dropped her things into the chest. Vechs scurried into the not so serect tunnel.

"Vechs? Wait for me!" When no answer came Aurey called

"Vechs?"


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Vechs groaned in pain. Rel Rel raced down the stairs. Twenty arrows. His own stupid trap. Vechs ran into the trip wire and knew it was over.

"Vechs!!! Oh my god! What happened?!" Aureylain grabbed his hand and tried to get him up. He moaned with the new pain added by jouseling his wounds. Vechs felt his helmet and goggles removed. The villain blinked in the dim light. Vechs' bright blue eyes pleaded with Aureylain to stop moving him. She stopped.

"Vechsykins? Will you live? Son of a biscuit, you've lost a lot of blood!" Aurey fretted over the arrows that Vechs is sure makes him look like a pin cushion. Twenty arrows to his stomach and legs, though one rogue arrow sliced into neck, barely missing his jugular.

"Vechs! Stay awake and keep talking to me!"

"H..hi.." Vechs coughed up blood.

"Vechs, yo..you have a ar..arrow in your throat." She whispered. It sounded as if she knew that it was the end and she couldn't stop it.

"I'll be alrig-" his sentence was cut off by a groan. Vechs felt his own blood pooling around him, the once strong life force weakening and seeping out with his blood. Tears fell down on to his body.

"Aurey, shhh-*cough*" Vechs tried to sooth her, now it wasn't just her tears. The tears mingled with the blood, the tangy smell grow a bit saltier. Vechs sighed and closed his eyes, not wanting to see his blood, wounds, and Aureylians distraught face.

"Vechs! Don't close your eyes Vechs! Please!" Aurey yelled.

"It's o..ok, I'm still..."

"Vechs, please!" She murmured. Her hands latched on to one of his hands. She murmured softly in his ear as pain wracked through his body.

"I love you! Oh Vechs please don't leave me, oh please don't leave!" Aurey begged.

"I love you..." Vechs panted out, pain searing his senses. Aurey was crying harder now, the salty tears falling onto him faster.

"Vechs,don't you dare say goodbye!"

"I'm sorry..." He breathed. The world fell into pieces. The pain made his eyes widen and back stiffen.

"Vechs, come back... I love you!"

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The devilish blue glint that was in his eyes faded. His grip loosened. His body relaxed. The blood stopped pooling. His voice stopped talking. The last breath had been taken. Now stillness and cold had taken him away. The last moments of life lingered. His heart beat for a second more. The blood pumped out one last time. The last moment lasted for what seemed a entirety until the blood stopped flowing and heart stopped beating. He lay now in my arms. One last tear slipped from his blank eyes. I gasped. He was gone. Forever. He was never coming back. I moaned softly. Even when he was seconds from he still tried to comfort me. Even when he was gone he cried one last tear. For me. My dress was soaked in his blood. I eased down to lay beside his broken body. The silence was deafening. Grief drowned me beneath its savage surface. I let my eyes look at his broken body. His dim blue eyes were frozen in the last moment. I gently closed his clouded eyes. My lungs squeezed and I gasped. Tears streamed down my face. I fell to the floor, sobbing. I squeezed my eyes shut as if I closed my eyes time would rewind. He was gone and he was never coming back.

Am I evil?

Date: Monday, July 28th, 2014 05:20 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] gottaloverattatta
Meh, it's fine. The pm is weird anyways.

Date: Monday, July 28th, 2014 05:34 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] gottaloverattatta
Yuppers!

Date: Monday, July 28th, 2014 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Man rattatta, what's with you and long comment chains :\ and also gj with the story, didn't get me into the feels but amazing story ( idk why character death doesn't affect me ) - vet anon

Date: Monday, July 28th, 2014 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] gottaloverattatta
The chains are the best if they're long! :D

Date: Wednesday, July 30th, 2014 01:17 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
True dat!

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