The Rift

[gottaloverattatta]

So I'm releasing this against another unnamed toddler crack chapter thingy. Mainly cause I'm trying something new out. But anyways. Enjoy this lil story. ^_^



The four gathered around the occurrence.

"What in Hell's Blazes is going on here?" Bdubs started to reach for the fluctuations in the air.

"Well don't touch it!" Seth smacked his arm away.

"Geez. Fine." Bdubs rubbed his arm as he brought it back.

"Well what the hell is it?!" Arkas looked at it nervously.

"We've gotta find out somehow." Zisteau kept his calm.

Seth motioned Bdubs back towards it. "Oh! So now you want me to touch it! Uh uh mister! You touch it!" Bdubs started to push Seth to the rift.

"Fine! I'll do it!" Zisteau shouted over the bickering as he slowly moved to the fluctuation. They all watched him as he reached to the disturbance. He held his breath and plunged it in. His eyes popped from his head. As he pulled it back out. "I'm...fine. It didn't hurt." He looked surprised. BDubs used the opportunity to push Seth in.

"What's it like in there?" He yelled into the rift. Seth came back, burning up.

"Hot! Fire! Hell!" Seth immediately hit Bdubs into the rift once the fire died out. "Zisteau, your people are in there. And giant lakes of lava. And these flying squids. And there was a huge black castle!" They looked to each other and slowly, one by one, filed in.

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Just a lil story about the guys discovering the nether. *shrugs* Don't judge. Hope you liked and, if you wanna be in a story, head on over to Thezombineer's post Etho's dream (series details). You can join the mindcrackers, and members of the Salad! So check it out!

Comments

[lindy14]

I can totally see them getting together and doing something like this. This is a cute little fic.

[gottaloverattatta]

Well thank ya kindly, and yeah. It does seem a bit likely. .-.

[chemrepnacl]

Adorbs! Love it :D

[gottaloverattatta]

Yay! It seems my writing has a way of taking that turn.

[hidgerknight]

If this was a serial, i will support it with Llamas. anyways, Good Short Story! :D

[gottaloverattatta]

Odd. But thank you! :D

[thezombineer]

Yay! Derps in Salad promotion! :P

No time for writing yet. Got irl stuff. :/

[gottaloverattatta]

So we just fill your roster till you do! :3

[thezombineer]

But there's already 15 people. Imma have a hard enough time with that :P

[gottaloverattatta]

You can intro 2 at a time, or whatever you wanna do with it. :3

[thezombineer]

True. Might have to do that. Or try to intro them all at once... (not happening)

[gottaloverattatta]

Seems easier to have a steady flow of characters coming in.

[thezombineer]

True. And if I bring em in over time, I can kill them just as quickly. I um. Did I say that out loud?

Nah. I won't kill them.

[gottaloverattatta]

Shame. Hehehe!

[thezombineer]

Well, maybe I will. Who knows?

[gottaloverattatta]

Death is never a bad thing. :3

[thezombineer]

True. Most authors use death as a plot mover.

[gottaloverattatta]

That's true. Your story though so do it how you will.

[thezombineer]

Death to all the characters!

[gottaloverattatta]

Well you've got like 3 immortals. Should be fun.

[thezombineer]

Indeed. :D

[gottaloverattatta]

Hehehe! Endless death! :D

[thezombineer]

:D

[gottaloverattatta]

Now then :D

[(Anonymous)]

Me likey! Ps, this is LT Being sneaky.

[gottaloverattatta]

I'm glad you likey! As for who you are, I suck with initials so....But it doesn't really matter, just glad you enjoyed! :3

[lthomas224]

Yeah, I'm me again. Dang computer crashes!

[gottaloverattatta]

Ah, hello, I wouldn't know. Lack of a computer, ya know? I used to have one but...it broke. .-.

[lthomas224]

Yeah, mine didn't last that long, only long enough for me to ge used to it. Then the hard-drive failed.

[gottaloverattatta]

Mine was outdated so bad it hurt. .-. It was eMachines.

[hidgerknight]

Etho out your computer, Boeh! :P j/k, but still, what are you typing on right now? i mean the complete specs of your computer?

[gottaloverattatta]

I don't have a working computer. .-. I use an IPod touch gen 3.

[r7]

interesting... and cool! Your writing is definitely improving, and you seem to be filled with good ideas.

Well done!

[gottaloverattatta]

Thank you so much! I have been getting more knit-picky with my writing. As for the ideas, it's not hard to keep to yourself and think a lot in my life. :/ But really, thank you!