Rabies

[gottaloverattatta]

This is gonna be pretty short, now onto the details. So I've done fluff, action, adorableness, fright night, and now, I decide to do tragedy or something of the sort, featuring the most tragic thing I can think of. Death! So enjoy. Or cry. I'd really prefer you cry.



He dug the hole one foot deep. He remembered all their adventures. All the strange sights and travels.

He dug down to two. He thought of all the love his friend had given him.

He dropped to three feet. He let his tears soak the dirt.

When he reached four, he remembered the vicious fight.

At five, he thought of the rabies that took to his best friend after it all happened.

At six, he cried again, over the look in his friend's eyes when he had to end it. Enraged, yet confused, and of course, hurt.

He gently placed his friend's body in the hole. As he filled the hole, his tears started once more.

"Goodnight Wolfie. I guess....you're in the Far Lands now." Kurt went quiet as he placed his collar and glasses on the grave.

He peeked over his shoulder at the grave as he walked away and whispered to himself, "I'm off to the Far Lands now. Far Lands or bust."

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So like I said, I'm a wicked person. I hope you all are crying now. It's nothing personal. I just want to know that my writing is effective. So hope you enjoyed. And cried. If you could only do one, I hope it was cry. I mean, I teared up while writing so I think I did fairly well, but if you didn't, let me know. I'll wanna be able to up the sadness.

Comments

[arcticember]

D:

[gottaloverattatta]

Does that mean I succeeded?

[lthomas224]

You have killed me with tragic-ness! D: Poor wolfie!

[gottaloverattatta]

It really, REALLY hurt to do that. .-.

[r7]

Feed me!Paaaainnnn!!!! (jk, but I quite liked it.)

[gottaloverattatta]

Well thank ya. It was pain to even think like this. .-. I guess Pet owners have trouble imagining pet deaths. .-.

[clashofdemonesense]

;_; Kurt... So sad, but overall enjoyed reading (Other than the feels. The FEELS!)

[gottaloverattatta]

I was aiming for the feels! Right in the Feel bone, right?! And thank you for reading! :)

[gottaloverattatta]

Reading back over this, I just feel heartless now. .-. That's a new feeling.

[(Anonymous)]

T_T I think I'm just going to go find a corner and cry now.

[(Anonymous)]

Btw I'm Syn, just being lazy. :3

[thezombineer]

NO. Heart = broken. If i were a human, I'd be dying of heart break.

This is made all the worse because I have had dogs pass away. I'm going to go cry now.

[gottaloverattatta]

I know that pain. .-.

[ex_writeitinsharpie308]

YES! GIVE ME YOUR SADNESS FEELS- I mean... I'm tottally crying,yes XD

[gottaloverattatta]

You can go ahead and absorb all the sadness feels.

[(Anonymous)]

;(

[gottaloverattatta]

*hugs* I know that feel.

[red_wolf]

You shall never crack my walls!

(Good little story though. 10/10, would send a link to people to make them suffer.)

[gottaloverattatta]

Oh what a lovely idea! Random strangers being made to suffer! :3

[tdscott8]

That's cool, happiness is over rated anyways...

[gottaloverattatta]

Exactly! Hehehehehehehehe! :3

[halcyonlioness]

"Master? We hurt."
"Master? We don't feel good."
"Master? We're thirsty."
"Master? We're very thirsty!"
"Master! We can't drink! Help us!"
"Master! Water is evil! Stay away! STAY AWAY!"
"Master smells of water! Water is evil! Master is evil!"
"Master? We are sorry... we hurt... we're cold..."
"Good-bye, Master. See you at the Far Lands..."

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Sorry. Just had to. Can't help imagining Wolfie's thoughts in his final days, suffering. Much too far away to get to a vet and get his shots.

Rabies-induced hydrophobia is one horrible way to die. Poor Kurt. He did the right thing...

[gottaloverattatta]

*slow clap* that was saddening....Bravo!

[anonymousrose]

Oh so sad, I enjoyed the little story though :) No tears shed this time, but my eyes did water a bit at the end, I'll have you know. The more heartbreaking feels the better!

[gottaloverattatta]

Dang. :/ I need to up the tears.

[(Anonymous)]

Nope. Didn't cry.

[gottaloverattatta]

Well then. Heartless are we?

[(Anonymous)]

You can't kill me. Not with fluff... Fluff makes me stronger and pain or sadness... HA NOPE!! MWHAHAHAHAHA!!

-fluff_monster

[gottaloverattatta]

Hm...I don't know how to best you......

[hidgerknight]

To be honest, i am just getting inspired from writings than getting other feelings, i do get kinda disturbed when it is mentioning rape, smut, or any other gorey stuff, but overall, 10/10 would get inspired again.
Also thanks for the lil' ownership of the secret prompt. :)

[gottaloverattatta]

Well for the disturbing stuff, just remember, we have warning tags, so if you don't want to find that in your story, check the tags. :3 as for ownership. Not a problem. Your writing seems well done, so I feel I can trust stories and prompts to you. ^_^