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Hello! This is elektron124 here, with the 0th chapter of my first fic: Of Fire and Light. Post any questions, comments, concerns in the comments below :) and please give feedback!
Chapter 1
Vechs Davion was a completely normal child. That is, right up until the age of six. Then weird things started happening. Fires would start around the house, smoke alarms would spontaneously trip, but Vechs' parents brushed these incidents aside. Vechs grew older. One day, he went to talk to his parents, who were sitting outside.
"Look mommy, I got a fire!" said Vechs, showing his mother a lit lighter.
Vechs' mother told him to never play with fire.
"But mommy i can move the fire around!" The tiny flame suddenly flew up above Vechs' head. "See?"
"Vechs, come inside please."
"Vechs, you have powers which people at school don't have, okay? They must not know that you have powers. That means you must never tell anyone you have powers, and no fire outside the house, or double chores for a week. Understand?"
A sullen Vechs nodded, a happy event turned into a disaster.

Years later, Vechs would come to thank his parents.
oh, no reference in this chapter

Date: Friday, July 11th, 2014 02:30 pm (UTC)
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I just read this three times. No regrets!!! >:D
More... I must have it...I need it.

Date: Saturday, July 12th, 2014 01:39 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tjmachado
Because Vechs isn't scary enough without Pyrokinesis. You have a reader, Elektron! :D

Date: Saturday, July 12th, 2014 09:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] r7
Keep going, my friend. Keep going! I always wondered how someone else would take the magical/on the run idea... I think our stories will be spliting though, your Vechs got to my mine wont..... (poor Vechus)....

Date: Saturday, July 12th, 2014 09:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] r7
no!nononononono, calm down..... it's okay, calm down... I have a future to adhear to! (remember, Magic and Hierarchs happen after this.) No, he just...... Sorry, spoilers! ;D Muahahahahahah

Date: Saturday, July 12th, 2014 10:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] r7
:D

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