Pause is Nervous
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mindcracklovePauseUnpause is very nervous...
A/N: This is my first fic on this site, and I've never done a fic for this fandom before! Let me know if I did something wrong please! I'm a bit rusty on writing, so this is terrible. Consider it a warm-up! Also, this takes place at Minecon 2013.
PauseUnpause was very nervous. He was pacing around the room rapidly while Guude watched, giggling.
"Pause has a crush! Pause has a crush! Pause has a crush!", Guude yelled jokingly.
"I do not have a crush! I'm just nervous, okay?", Pause snapped.
"It's just Beef, Pause. We've known him forever!", Guude informs him ever-so-politely. Pause growls in frustration and begins pacing quicker. Guude rolls his eyes, and walks away, presumably to his hotel room.
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A sharp knock is heard at the door.
"Hello?", Pause asks, while nearly tripping trying to get to the door.
"It's Beef!", he called out from behind the door.
"And Guude!"
Pause opens the door, and promptly knocks Beef over while attempting to hug him. Guude rolls his eyes, muttering something about Canadians.
A/N: This is my first fic on this site, and I've never done a fic for this fandom before! Let me know if I did something wrong please! I'm a bit rusty on writing, so this is terrible. Consider it a warm-up! Also, this takes place at Minecon 2013.
PauseUnpause was very nervous. He was pacing around the room rapidly while Guude watched, giggling.
"Pause has a crush! Pause has a crush! Pause has a crush!", Guude yelled jokingly.
"I do not have a crush! I'm just nervous, okay?", Pause snapped.
"It's just Beef, Pause. We've known him forever!", Guude informs him ever-so-politely. Pause growls in frustration and begins pacing quicker. Guude rolls his eyes, and walks away, presumably to his hotel room.
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A sharp knock is heard at the door.
"Hello?", Pause asks, while nearly tripping trying to get to the door.
"It's Beef!", he called out from behind the door.
"And Guude!"
Pause opens the door, and promptly knocks Beef over while attempting to hug him. Guude rolls his eyes, muttering something about Canadians.
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Date: Friday, July 4th, 2014 03:32 am (UTC)I haven't written much on this site (actually, only one thing) but I would say that more detail would definitely spice it up bit. Add some more description of their surroundings, or maybe some more on just how nervous Pause is. Just adding some constructive criticism here, cause I know that's helpful. ^-^
Also, I don't recall you doing an introduction thingy, so welcome to the salad! :)
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Date: Friday, July 4th, 2014 03:58 am (UTC)no subject
Date: Friday, July 4th, 2014 03:07 pm (UTC)And woo, HP :D
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Date: Friday, July 4th, 2014 03:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Friday, July 4th, 2014 08:48 pm (UTC)