Evil chap.2

Friday, June 13th, 2014 12:48 am
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I stood there in the cave, the torch light reflecting off of a pair of green goggles. We were somewhere in Dalania, as Vechs fondly called it, but in all honestly, I had no idea where were actually were. I heard a light, whistling tune behind me, and I spun around.


Vechs was standing behind me, merrily skipping along, mumbling happy songs while he tore monsters apart with his prized bow. It seemed so strange, so out of place but… so.. vechs, so… cute.


Wait what? I just called whistling while carelessly murdering undead.. cute. What on earth is wrong with me? A voice in my head spoke up, snapping me back to reality. I looked at the red-hatted face, before realising I was looking at the face of a murderer…. A murderer who had killed someone right before my eyes.


Why in the world am I still near him? The rational part of me spoke up. When I thought about it… I didn't really know. When I had heard about his sulking… he hadn't left his base in weeks. Paul had even told me both the entrance near his base and the elevator in Vechs’ castle had been sealed up with obsidian… I just couldn't stand it.


When I managed to muster my courage to face the murderer,I had gone to his base and eventually managed to get Vechs to talk to me. In the small slit in the obsidian walls I could see him through, he looked like a mess. There were huge dark circles under his eyes, his goggles were twisted, and his hair looked like it hadn't been touched in weeks.


“Go away… please… I don't want….” He whispered meekly. Back then I thought the ending of the trailed off bit was ‘company’ but now that I think about it, I’m pretty sure it was ‘to hurt you’.


“Oh, come on, Vechuseykins. Please?” I asked. for some reason, when I finished saying the word, I saw him grip his head, and slowly fall to the ground. Luckily when his body was about halfway down, I heard the distinct click! of the lock on the obsidian panel sliding open. I stepped in, and saw something I did not expect to see.


Vechs was sitting in the corner, curled into a ball, clutching his head, but that was not what surprised me. His clothes were tattered and torn, not to mention sindged. I could see the distinct marks of zombie claws and arrow wounds, wound much too deep for someone even trying to fight off said monsters. honestly, with the insane amount of damage that couldn't have been done non-intentionally, it looked as though he had tried… tried… to commit suicide… I had to choke back a sob. Even if he had killed Z, he had been acting weird that day and… for some reason I didn't want to see him go.  Judging from the variety of marks on the clothes, he had tried multiple times.


I immediately rushed over and crouched next to him and put my arm under his, trying to get him to his feet.


“Vechs? Vechs! C’mon, whats wrong?” I asked desperately, hoping to get a response.


“H..He.. He’s… He’s back… no..nonono…. no… run...please…. not… not again….” He mumbled incoherently, confusing me greatly.


“He? Whose He? Vechs?”


“Him!” He shouted, as though it was the most obvious thing in the world, before continuing in his previous, broken, tone.  “No… no, please…” He mumbled, and tried to shake me off. I managed to hold on but it wasn't hard, as he was incredibly weak, as though he hadn't eaten the entire time He had trapped himself in his base. When he couldn't shake me off, he tried to kick me out the door, with limited success for exactly the same reason. At this point I could literally feel the panic he was feeling through the trembling in his skin. His hand darted to something silver behind his back.


A glint of metal caught my eye, and I immediately went into defense mode. After what had happened to Zisteau, my body just reacted, and in fact, it was right, partially. Vechs had a small knife in his hand, stabbing rapidly. Oddly, it wasn't aimed at me, it was aimed inward. Straight at his heart.



A/n: Bum bum bum…. Cliffy!
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Date: Friday, June 13th, 2014 09:13 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Keep doing what you do, this is my 2nd favourite ongoing fanfic

Date: Friday, June 13th, 2014 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] thundertricker
Really smooth, really good. Nice debut/ comeback to say the least. Keep it up m8!

Date: Friday, June 13th, 2014 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Yay u did continue it!! I told you this had potential!! (only saying that agin so u know which anonymous this is)

Date: Saturday, June 14th, 2014 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
No problem.

Date: Friday, June 13th, 2014 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Da suspense is madding. I hope it lasts! (not really)

Date: Saturday, June 14th, 2014 03:35 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Why cliff hanger, WHY!!! Really well written and please keep it up! : )

Date: Saturday, June 14th, 2014 07:45 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] captain_crackers
I hate cliff-hangers so much, but it was really, really good, and I can't wait for the next one!

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