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This is the start to my first fanfiction. Hope you like it!
Thanks Tom for fixing my tagging problem!

Paul prayed and prayed that someone was going to find them. That someone was going to rescue them right now. But, when he opened his eyes, he had no such luck. The same four stone brick walls encased him and Seth in an inescapable room with hooded men and guns at every corner. He had no idea where he was or why he was being held here. No idea. He didn't even remember how he got into this terrible place. All he could recall was,

He was rummaging around in his chests looking for who knows what. "No, that's not it. Not that either... Where could it be!!" he exclaimed, throwing his hands up in frustration. He was about to turn around to look in another chest when he heard a soft voice saying, "Are you looking for this?" Then, all went dark before he could turn around and see who it was. Then, he arrived in this room, head hurting, and stuck.

Seth didn't recall how he got here either, except hearing a small voice say, "Hope you like darkness, Seth." Then, he too had blacked out and found himself here, stuck in the very same room he was in now. There was no door, window, no way out of the room. They were fed only twice a day with cold bread, meat, and water that looked like it had some nasty bacteria in it. Luckily, neither he nor Seth had tossed their cookies yet, so it seemed uncontaminated. There were no beds to sleep in, nothing! "Praying, Paul?" Seth asked, in a teasing tone. "Yes, of course, Seth. I advise you'd better do the same." Paul said before closing his eyes and drifting off to sleep. All Paul could do was wait, pray, and most importantly, never lose hope.. Please save us, please, someone save us!!

Date: Tuesday, April 22nd, 2014 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] justicetom
I like it! Also, I've got the tags, don't worry :P

Date: Tuesday, April 22nd, 2014 10:27 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] darknight307
I liked this very much <3 I'm too curious for my own good so now I have so many questions, such as who the heck is this person who managed to knock out Paul and Seth? xD (I'll find out later hopefully) Good job and keep up the good work! :3

Date: Wednesday, April 23rd, 2014 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] ex_writeitinsharpie308
Who did it?! Halp! The cliffie is unbearable! (GJ on the cliffie, BTW. Some people suck at them. I'm looking at myself and people on fanfiction.net)
Anyways, I enjoyed that! *Holds up hand for a high-five* Yes? No? Maybe?

Date: Wednesday, April 23rd, 2014 10:45 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] pseudo8413
I love it, I can't wait to read more! :D

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