I thought there was Cake... (Team Canada stuff!)
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I made this writing to see how well I can incorperate better vocabulary terms for emotions with the stuff I write! Hope you enjoy and tell me if you want more surprise writings like this one! :P
A small yet compacted room, bounded the two's domesticated hatred for one another. There was a fog building up in the room, its source was a metal box composed of fire in it's insides. Within the minor fire was a soon to be sugary delight, meant to re-unite the two, it had seemed to only set them apart even further. What caused this rivalry was jealousy, who tried to settle this dispute was their teammate, named Beef. His idea seemed flawed and dumb at the time, but it was starting to work...shortly but for now, the baby pink striped walls and cabinetry filled with ingredients did nothing prominent to suffice the two's long gone friendship. The B-Team pastry shoppe cabinetry indeed.
The two didn't always argue with one another, it all started when one of them triumphed over the other. But, that wasn't the problem. The problem was that both of them had inappropriate reactions to what had happened. One of them felt proud of what they had done, and was further commended. While the other, in fact, felt lower in class, as the victor took his podium, stacked it upon his, and rose higher than ever. They had thought this rivalry would've been over in the next round of UHC, but the boy's invisible podium was take away too, leaving hundreds more invisible podiums. These podiums were there to keep the boy from breaking into tears; as soon as one podium was taken, another replaced it, sadly only he could see these podiums...
Instead of being belligerent, they seemed quite emotionless. These are the faces that say 'I hate this. This is a waste of time. When is this going to be over?'
"Can you pass me the flour, Etho?" Pause asked, unamused and impatient
"You're not helpless, go get it yourself." Etho bitterly replied still focused on his work
"Do you want Beef to think everything is working out or not?"
"I honestly don't care anymore, let me just do my work, so I can get this over with..."
"So you WANT Beef to worry about us more, right?!" Pause's voice grew louder for emphasis
"Why don't you just kill me with your bow and get it over with! If your so impatient, I mean I'm here still wondering why you haven't killed me already!" Etho's voice grew as loud as Pause's. He dropped his things, shoved Pause out of the way, and made it to the heated furnace. It was as heated as the fury shown in Etho's expression. He took what was in the furnace and slammed the door that let out the oven fog shut.
"Easy there! We don't own this joint y'know!" Pause yelled
Etho ignored Pause's remark and continued with his task at hand. He was starting to slightly calm down, just the idea of triumph once again, was a thought Etho angered. He never hated Pause, though. He only despised him from time-to-time, the only times he felt incensed were when people tried to confront his anger; this is considered one of those times, since Beef wanted to settle the silent conflict between the two.
"Why are you so mad? What did I do that hurt you so...much?"
"I'M NOT HURT!", Etho screamed in reply,"I'm just tired of it..."
"Of what?! Inconclusive words, man!"
"Of you winning! And gloating it! And I get stuck in the corner of 'You tried your best and failed'!"
"When have I ever gloated?!"
Etho glared in Pause's direction, then looked down at his sword gesturing him to look. Pause looked down and saw what was inscribed on the sword. Etho had a wounded look in his eyes, as he saw Pause look into the sword.
'The Etho Slayer.' Pause read aloud,"The one gloat of many."
Etho nodded, and continued back to his work. Trying to not even look in Pause's direction. Pause looked up at Etho from his sword, he had a remorse look in his eyes, but he did know that Etho isn't entirely innocent too.
"I'm sorry." Pause replied,"I shouldn't have gloated so much. But you have to admit you aren't so innocent too!"
Etho quickly jolted his head in Pause's direction,"What did I do?!"
"You were being a baby about it."
"Was not!" Etho replied chuckling partially
"Uh-huh, Beef would say otherwise!" Pause chuckled as well
"Someone say my name?" Beef walked through the door
"No we didn't. Goodbye!" Etho immediately said, trying to keep in his laughter
"Well fine! But at least let me try some of these sugary goodies!"
"Oh right. We were suppose to make stuff. Whoopsy-daisy!" Pause replied, grinning in joy
"You guys are fine now?"
"Yup, I think we are!" Etho responded, delighted
"That's good! But my plan didn't work out entirely..."
"Wait what?" Etho replied, very confused,"I thought this is what you wanted?"
"Ya! Wasn't this the whole point? So we can get along better?" Pause questioned
"Well, yes that, but also, I wanted to eat some cake too! I thought you people would work together and make cake at the same time! It was the perfect 2-for-1 deal! But you people forgot to finish it!" Beef 'play' whined
A small yet compacted room, bounded the two's domesticated hatred for one another. There was a fog building up in the room, its source was a metal box composed of fire in it's insides. Within the minor fire was a soon to be sugary delight, meant to re-unite the two, it had seemed to only set them apart even further. What caused this rivalry was jealousy, who tried to settle this dispute was their teammate, named Beef. His idea seemed flawed and dumb at the time, but it was starting to work...shortly but for now, the baby pink striped walls and cabinetry filled with ingredients did nothing prominent to suffice the two's long gone friendship. The B-Team pastry shoppe cabinetry indeed.
The two didn't always argue with one another, it all started when one of them triumphed over the other. But, that wasn't the problem. The problem was that both of them had inappropriate reactions to what had happened. One of them felt proud of what they had done, and was further commended. While the other, in fact, felt lower in class, as the victor took his podium, stacked it upon his, and rose higher than ever. They had thought this rivalry would've been over in the next round of UHC, but the boy's invisible podium was take away too, leaving hundreds more invisible podiums. These podiums were there to keep the boy from breaking into tears; as soon as one podium was taken, another replaced it, sadly only he could see these podiums...
Instead of being belligerent, they seemed quite emotionless. These are the faces that say 'I hate this. This is a waste of time. When is this going to be over?'
"Can you pass me the flour, Etho?" Pause asked, unamused and impatient
"You're not helpless, go get it yourself." Etho bitterly replied still focused on his work
"Do you want Beef to think everything is working out or not?"
"I honestly don't care anymore, let me just do my work, so I can get this over with..."
"So you WANT Beef to worry about us more, right?!" Pause's voice grew louder for emphasis
"Why don't you just kill me with your bow and get it over with! If your so impatient, I mean I'm here still wondering why you haven't killed me already!" Etho's voice grew as loud as Pause's. He dropped his things, shoved Pause out of the way, and made it to the heated furnace. It was as heated as the fury shown in Etho's expression. He took what was in the furnace and slammed the door that let out the oven fog shut.
"Easy there! We don't own this joint y'know!" Pause yelled
Etho ignored Pause's remark and continued with his task at hand. He was starting to slightly calm down, just the idea of triumph once again, was a thought Etho angered. He never hated Pause, though. He only despised him from time-to-time, the only times he felt incensed were when people tried to confront his anger; this is considered one of those times, since Beef wanted to settle the silent conflict between the two.
"Why are you so mad? What did I do that hurt you so...much?"
"I'M NOT HURT!", Etho screamed in reply,"I'm just tired of it..."
"Of what?! Inconclusive words, man!"
"Of you winning! And gloating it! And I get stuck in the corner of 'You tried your best and failed'!"
"When have I ever gloated?!"
Etho glared in Pause's direction, then looked down at his sword gesturing him to look. Pause looked down and saw what was inscribed on the sword. Etho had a wounded look in his eyes, as he saw Pause look into the sword.
'The Etho Slayer.' Pause read aloud,"The one gloat of many."
Etho nodded, and continued back to his work. Trying to not even look in Pause's direction. Pause looked up at Etho from his sword, he had a remorse look in his eyes, but he did know that Etho isn't entirely innocent too.
"I'm sorry." Pause replied,"I shouldn't have gloated so much. But you have to admit you aren't so innocent too!"
Etho quickly jolted his head in Pause's direction,"What did I do?!"
"You were being a baby about it."
"Was not!" Etho replied chuckling partially
"Uh-huh, Beef would say otherwise!" Pause chuckled as well
"Someone say my name?" Beef walked through the door
"No we didn't. Goodbye!" Etho immediately said, trying to keep in his laughter
"Well fine! But at least let me try some of these sugary goodies!"
"Oh right. We were suppose to make stuff. Whoopsy-daisy!" Pause replied, grinning in joy
"You guys are fine now?"
"Yup, I think we are!" Etho responded, delighted
"That's good! But my plan didn't work out entirely..."
"Wait what?" Etho replied, very confused,"I thought this is what you wanted?"
"Ya! Wasn't this the whole point? So we can get along better?" Pause questioned
"Well, yes that, but also, I wanted to eat some cake too! I thought you people would work together and make cake at the same time! It was the perfect 2-for-1 deal! But you people forgot to finish it!" Beef 'play' whined
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Date: Sunday, March 9th, 2014 08:08 pm (UTC)Well, a lot of them were used incorrectly or in the wrong form.
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