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I'm done... I'm finally done... 18 chapters. My first fiction... I can't believe I'm done! Squid, you'll love this part. Also, I know. I got lazy. Don't complain :P

"That actually worked? That... was unexpected." Rob said, the lightning having granted each blade the power of the proc. Everyone ran forwards, prepared to fight. Etho still had a headache, from hitting the wall, but he was awake. He was angry. Etho ran faster than the others and stabbed into one zombie. A dragon roar sounded, and green sparkles flew from his blade. He killed all the zombies nearby, and ran in further.

Kurt ran forwards, Wolfie with him. He ran into battle, killing many zombies. Suddenly, a zombie hit him from behind, and he was knocked over, sword flying from his hand. He saw a zombie standing over him, sword raised, prepared to strike. Suddenly, a white figure slammed into the zombie and started clawing and biting. The zombie died, quickly. Kurt got to his feet, and patted Wolfie.
"Thanks, Wolfie. You really saved my life!" Kurt congratulated the wolf. Wolfie looked up and barked.

"Hey, Rob! Is that the Jimmies?" Pause yelled at Rob. Rob looked at where Pause was pointing and nodded in surprise.
"They're breaking through! Guys, get to the Jimmies!" Pause yelled, loud enough for everyone to hear. Suddenly, there was a hole through the mobs. They joined up forces, then turned attentions to massacring zombies.

Suddenly, they were done. There was enough rotten flesh to feed them for months. The zombies were dead. All the monster army was dead. Though, it was not without cost. Everyone had enough cuts, bruises and broken bones to be healing for months. Now, all they had to do was heal, then try to figure out how to fix everyone being in Minecraft.

"Everyone! Gather around. After many, many hours of toil, we have created the new device. We will fix this all. But this will have two changes. This will wipe your memories of this entire event, and time will go backwards. Before this all happened... Except for me. I will remember all of this. Actually, I've decided. I'm gonna post this to Salad, as a fan fiction. So... All of you, I want to know what you experienced. Because posting this will be difficult. You guys, tonight, get your thoughts in order, say goodbye to your friends from any other communities, etc etc." Tom stated to everyone. The night went by, with Tom interviewing everyone. Then the day came.

A lever was placed, where Tom was standing. He glanced around at each of his friends. His Salad friends, his new friends in the Mindcrack, the other Jimmies.
"If you have anything you wish to do before we go back, do it now." Tom said to the gathering, though his eyes were centered on Squid. Suddenly, Squid understood.

"Etho! I've been wanting to do this for a very long time... Because we won't have memories, I can say it. I love you." Squid said, grabbing Etho and pulling him into a kiss. She released after about a minute.

"Wait! Stop!" Etho yelled, his cheeks almost in flame, obviously talking to Tom. But Tom had already pulled the lever.
"Goodbye, my friends!" Tom yelled, as redstone whirred. Instantly, the world shattered once more.

Tom fell into the ordinary world. He shook his head, tired and confused. He still had his memories. He opened up a WordPad, and started to write the story up. His story. The Device.

THE END



So, what did you think? Is it true? Or not? What do you think? Because I'm not telling!

Date: Monday, February 17th, 2014 08:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] drama_llama1
THIS WAS SUCH AN AMAZING FIC! you did very well, plus it was your first so you should be proud :)

Date: Monday, February 17th, 2014 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Awwwww! So cute! I loved this all along. Sad to see it go.
-Beca

Date: Monday, February 17th, 2014 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] blackcobrane
I had a feeling the end was from an TV show... Can remember what though. So sad to see this amazing fic end, I'm sure squid would love the end xD

Date: Tuesday, May 13th, 2014 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
From Phineas and Ferb? The second dimension the movie? Isabella?

Date: Wednesday, May 14th, 2014 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] blackcobrane
Yeah I think so, I only thought that when I saw it (only CUZ my little brother wanted to watch it)

Date: Monday, February 17th, 2014 10:06 pm (UTC)
squidney87: Me and Etho. <3 (Default)
From: [personal profile] squidney87
Kdoejdhjxdiejduxjsbdjdkwkbduxiwkbdjd why?!?

Uy. Great fic Tom! Can't wait to see anything more coming from you. :D

That ending man. They aren't gonna remember! Oh nu!

Date: Monday, February 17th, 2014 10:12 pm (UTC)
hawser: A pokémon called the Nidoran-Female (Default)
From: [personal profile] hawser
Awesome! That was a cool ending!

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