The Device: Chapter 17

[justicetom]

Chapter 17! For whatever reason, I've noticed that The Device gets less comments than... Nearly anything. Is this from people not commenting, or people not reading?

"So... You knocked Etho out, but not me? What, do you want to fight with the original? Your original?" Vechs asked of V, as their blades clashed. V shook his head.
"No, I'm here to tell you of something I found out. I have these powers because I spent weeks studying in a stronghold. Some of those books are ancient, and reference magic powers. I studied, and eventually I realised. We always had inherent magical powers. We just had no way of unlocking them. The device Etho and Seth made unlocked them, and we just had to understand how to use them. Join with me, and together, we will rule the world!" V yelled, still fighting. Vechs scoffed.
"Yeah, rule the world, huh? You'll get rid of me eventually. I know you. You are me. You would kill me eventually. Then no-one would be able to oppose you. I'm not falling for that, 'V'!" Vechs yelled, putting extra force into his next blow. V jumped backwards, dodging the blow. Suddenly, an arrow slammed into V's foot. He looked down in surprise, then realised his mistake and looked back up. But it was too late. Vechs' blade slammed into V's chest, forcing a hole in the diamond.

V staggered back, sliding off the blade, eyes going dark. He disintegrated into dust. Bdubs stepped forwards.
"He ain't coming back! V died like they do in that Morph mod, from Attack of the B-Team!" He said, knowledgebly. Suddenly, they all heard groaning. The zombies and skeletons walked forwards, ready to fight. Tom teleported in, with Etho, who had woken up.
"This is not good... When V died, his control on the monsters was released. So, now they're just pathing to find us. And they still have size, weapons, armour and intelligence. So... We are in trouble." Tom told everyone, his American accent growing more pronounced. Rob walked forwards, Excaliju in his hand.
"Guys, hold out your blades. I'm going to try and give them the ability to use a proc. It might work, or it might not. If not, then we are in trouble." Rob stated, grimly. Everyone held out their swords, and suddenly lightning hit each blade.

The Jimmies kept on fighting. Soon enough, they would break through enemy lines, and get into the Arena.
It's a bit shorter than the others, but I don't have much left. So enjoy! Plus, I'm posting one a day.

Comments

[drama_llama1]

CLIFFHANGERS DUUUUDE! ;-;

[justicetom]

Yep. #CliffHangersRock

[drama_llama1]

NOOOOO! NOT COOL! good fiction though :)

[breetheheliolisk]

I do read I'm just lazy.

[purplesky]

Tom, I read pretty much everything that's posted on here. But I don't always comment. Mostly because I don't know what to say. Don't worry about the lack of comments! I don't get that many on my fics either.

[hawser]

Tom, sometimes people get too lazy to comment, but they do read. Like, for instance, one of my posts recived ZERO comments here, but when I checked on DeviantArt, I had 70 views, and 3 favorites. So theres no need to worry! (Besides, I'm sure the lurkers are reading too, but they don't feel the need to commemt).

PS: I'm still reading every chapter of The Device ;)

[justicetom]

Thanks! You are seriously like the biggest fan of The Device.

[hawser]

I'm a fan of good writers! *waves finger scoldingly*

[rainwhen]

I'm reading just not commenting i don't comment on much. Love the story though.

[squidney87]

Well. I read them all. I usually comment too. People just get lazy. XD