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So this is Kappa's prompt. Team Canada cuddles sounds like fun to write to me. And hawser. We kinda worked on this one together. So this is part 1 cause we both need to sleep sometime. So anyway, I hope you enjoy part 1! OH MAN I MISSED OUT A PARAGRAPH I'M SO SORRY!!! I've edited it in now.


(Purple)

Beef raced across the flimsy quartz bridge. He could just make out Pause and Etho on the other side, cheering him on. But it was still a long way to safety. He jumped as another part of the bridge gave way and tumbled into the lava below. "Stupid ghasts man... Always trying to kill me." There was a piercing screech from behind him and another fireball sailed past his head.

(Hawser)

With the bridge breaking bit by bit with fire running along the rim, Beef tried to make a run for it. As fast as he could, he screamed "Guys I think I'm gonna make it!". With fate always at his side at the wrong times, he tripped upon the cluster of neather rack that had fallen. Screams from the other side calling for him, were anything but gone. "BEEF!!!" He got up only to see a frightened Pause and Etho on the otherside. With the haze of the ghasts fireballs only getting closer, Beef headed off again.

(Purple)

Beef ran, legs pumping, fuelled purely by adrenaline. He had to make it back, the guys were relying on him. It's not like they could just do it again. The bridge was in the process of being destroyed and they didn't have the blocks to build another one. He had to make it back. Another screech and more bridge disappeared behind him. Beef dived towards where Etho and Pause were standing, crashing into them and knocking Pause over. "Oops, sorry guys. I was going a little fast there."

Pause got back onto his feet with a grin. "Dude, that doesn't matter. What does matter is that you got back in one piece!"

"Yeah, I guess I did." Beef yawned. "I'm really tired though. That was a long run." Beef swayed unsteadily on his feet. Etho caught him just before he fell.

Pause shook his head. "Lazy ass. Let's get him back to the base."

(Hawser)

Etho put one of beefs arms on his shoulder to help him up, he then tried to carry Beef. Pause took the other and did the same, once he worked out in his head that Beef nearly died. Slowly they carried him to the base. But they all heard one sound, one sound that really really brought back memories. The screech of the Ghast came about, following a blast that was above them. Clusters of nether rack fell from the ceiling and was falling quickly at the tired team. "Go...go...GO NOW!!" Etho yelled while staring at the ceiling in shock. Beef still collapsed in exahustion only made the scenario worse.


Prompt: http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/511158.html#cutid1
Part 2: http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/512493.html#cutid1

Date: Monday, January 27th, 2014 01:43 am (UTC)
anonymousrose: Just an anonymous flower :D (Default)
From: [personal profile] anonymousrose
OOooo *worries* I hope they're are alright! They should be though, they are Team Canada! <3 Can't wait to see the next part :D

Date: Monday, January 27th, 2014 01:50 am (UTC)
kappa77: (Default)
From: [personal profile] kappa77
I just made the stupidest noise when I saw this :p

But I love this and can't wait for the next bit!

Date: Monday, January 27th, 2014 02:03 am (UTC)
hawser: A pokémon called the Nidoran-Female (Default)
From: [personal profile] hawser
How you people like my writing parts? I wrote everyother parts...you guys think i should write and do fanart?
Edited Date: Monday, January 27th, 2014 02:08 am (UTC)

Date: Monday, January 27th, 2014 02:15 am (UTC)
squidney87: Me and Etho. <3 (Default)
From: [personal profile] squidney87
This is super cute cause I love Team Canada! One thing though, you kinda doubled up part of it where it said the same part twice. That kinda put me off a little bit, but other than that this is awesome!
Edited Date: Monday, January 27th, 2014 02:16 am (UTC)

Date: Monday, January 27th, 2014 07:56 pm (UTC)
hawser: A pokémon called the Nidoran-Female (Default)
From: [personal profile] hawser
i think we should mark it! :) you can edit this one too, so its says who wrote what.

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