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Part 2... ooh this is fun to write instead of studying :3 buut I have to so no more of this for about a week until I get exams outta da way.

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BTC paced, annoyed at he had to be kept waiting. He could yell at someone to relieve his tension but that would be a waste of his energy. Taking a deep breath, he looked around again, hoping to see her. He didn’t see Mew but he did see Jad running up to him breathing hard. Something was wrong… he could tell. “Jad, what happened?” Jad ran up to him and pretty much doubled over trying to get his breathing normal again. “Jad. What happened?” BTC asked again more demanding this time, his patience running thin.
“Mew… Elfy… MC… Nebris… fighting…” He managed to get out before having to take another deep breath. BTC understood what he meant though and rushed off to find the four. He arrived in the middle of the village, hearing a large argument break out. It seemed to be MC and Nebris vs Elfy and Mew.

“I have! If you would actually look in the chests, you would see all the materials I have gathered for us.” Elfy glared at Nebris as he snorted in disbelief.

“Well if you did do your job like you say you do, then where is all the food?” Elfy laughed without humour at his accusation.
“Well if you would just do your job instead of gambling away your food and then losing it all because you cheated, then I wouldn’t have to get you ten times as much as anyone else. Since there isn’t enough for ten times as much, you don’t get what you gamble off!”

Nebris looked like he was about to make a retort to her sarcastic comment about him gambling but BTC cut them off with an angry glare. He watched them fume trying to calm down, briefly looking at Mew and MC but they seemed to be peaceful… so they were there more to either break up a physical fight or help in it. “Okay, listen I don’t care about your problem but we can’t go fighting among each other. Remember, the others are the enemy and we must stop them.” The four of them nodded watching BTC walk away at a quick pace before turning back “Mew, follow. We need to talk.” She didn’t look happy to be addressed like that but followed without argument, while the others dispersed from the square.
BTC didn’t have to turn around to know that she was following. “Mew, I need you to get started making potions for the battle. We are going to take out Boulderfist… they have been a pain for too long.” BTC waved a hand dismissing her and made his way into his place. Mew watched him walk away and rushed away to find Rose. It was not common knowledge, but there was a rebel group rising. They were completely against clan wars, yet some of them were still fighters. The only way to get messages around was a scribe and Rose happened to be Cobblehaterz only scribe. Mew found Rose in the forest writing away on paper. Hearing Mew, she looked up.

“Mew? W-what are you doing here?” Rose asked, worried, watching the others facial expression, as Mew composed herself Rose tried to cover what she was doing with other papers. Mew was curious what the girl was doing, but now was not the time to ask.
“I was just talking to BTC… we’re going to attack Boulderfist, I don’t think Pak authorized it so it’s not going to be a fair ambush.” Rose snorted; there was no such thing as a fair ambush. Mew chose to ignore her interruption “We need to warn them and the others just in case. I don’t want another blood war on our hands again with the other tribes.” Rose nodded starting to write a warning letter that only the few in the rebel group would be able to understand.

Mew nodded to Rose and hurried back to her alchemy shop; she couldn’t stop her mind from racing through ideas to stop this fight, or even turn it around on the leaders, but the only thing that came to her mind turned into a full on war and no one wanted that. Book had come by Mew`s shop with another request from BTC, this one seemed outlandish; he wanted a crazy amount of potions in a short amount of time. “Hey Book, do you know why he wants this?” She already knew but wasn’t sure if any of the others knew, the way BTC commanded everyone.
“Um.. no actually I don’t, but if he needs it in a week then something is very wrong. Mew… Just, don’t fight against us… we need to stay together… Families stay together.” Mew watched Book go not sure what to think of her warning, continued silently making potions if this attack was going to happen then they would have to chose… the alliance or their clan.

Book walked away wondering why Mew asked her that, it made her think of what they would do if a battle were to come. She wouldn’t mind a battle; she could prove Cobblehaterz were better than every other clan but if it meant the others in her clan would get hurt, she didn’t really want that. Book checked around the village. Elfy was the next on her list... BTC needed many different materials, mostly iron, food and potions. It felt degrading to be the messenger but if there weren’t any battles, then being a warrior was pointless. She found Elfy fuming near the library… ‘hm… where is Rose? I haven’t seen her yet today, nevermind’ she had more pressing matters on her hands. “Hey, Elfy! BTC needs food and iron by the end of the week. “ Elfy glared at her for a minute before nodding. Apparently she was still mad at Nebris. Book made the smart decision to leave her alone and report back to BTC.

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Ficeny walked around to the left as Bdoubleo crept to the right. The plan was to surround person they were following, and now was the time since they were slowly coming to a walking pace after a long period of running. Neither Ficeny or Bdoubleo could tell who it was from this far back, but whoever it was, was heading towards their village. They didn’t seem hostile, but in these times you had to be on your guard or you were done for. There was a rustling in the bushes next to Bdoubleo making him flinch, making her snicker softly before stopping as he motioning for her to be silent, slowly pulled back his bow moving towards the bushes. Bdoubleo pushed the bushes aside revealing Fae sitting there silently looking up at them with a grave expression. Bdoubleo was about to give him hell for being in there without telling them when Fae stood up and sprinted after the person. Ficeny looked from Bdoubleo to Fae with a ‘What’s wrong with him?’ look. Bdoubleo shrugged and headed after him while Ficeny hung back just in case.

Fae tackled the person to the ground, roughly pushing their face into the dirt. “Why are you here?” he growled just loud enough for them to hear but not for Bdoubleo who was making his way towards them.
“I- I have a message for you. From Rose, of Cobblehaterz…” the person handed him a note then stuggled to get out. Fae stopped the persons movements with a glare before opening the note. It said ‘Attack imminent. Be ready.” Fae crumbled it up after reading it and let the person up. They nodded to him before running off into the trees to the left. Bdoubleo made his way through the thick bushes to see Fae standing there looking around.

“Where’d they go?!” Fae looked at Bdoubleo then shrugged and called to Ficeny telling her it was okay for her to come up. He turned back to Bdoubleo who was wearing an incredulous look.

“What?”

“You don’t know where they went?!”

“Look around, there are trees everywhere. They could have gone anywhere but they gave me a note and I have to give it to Guude.” Bdoubleo nodded slightly, knowing he had a point but still not fully believing him, before heading back towards the village with Ficeny throwing Fae worried glances. They arrived at the village as Fae dragged Ficeny over to the side. “Cobblehaterz are coming here. Go tell RedYellow and Drac.” She nodded and rushed off, still worrying about him; he hadn’t been the same since Cobblehaterz killed his sister, but she couldn’t think of that while trying to find RedYellow and Drac. RedYellow would most likely be out hunting while Drac would be in the fields. RedYellow would be harder to find since she was out in the woods hunting. So Drac it was. She ran towards the fields only to see Drac running towards her… something was wrong, something was very wrong.

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Cobblehaterz: Mew, Book, Rose, Elfy, Jad
Boulderfist: Fae, RedYellow, Drac, Ficeny

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 02:55 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] hawser
Oh oh oh more more more! But take ur time! :)

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 03:24 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] hawser
Dont Worry! I'll be crowd control! You go on with your exams, i'll keep them off your back :D

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 04:05 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] hawser
*accepts shades and puts them on* i'll do it for CoC!

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] redyellowgirl
Yess! Lovely. I greatly enjoy this.

Yay for being in Boulderfist! :D

Date: Wednesday, January 29th, 2014 08:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bookworm2692
That's because you were in it when you died
Edited Date: Wednesday, January 29th, 2014 08:37 pm (UTC)

Date: Friday, January 31st, 2014 06:37 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bookworm2692
Ok, Voo was most definitely not in Boulderfist at all...

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 03:26 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] squidney87
Yaaaaaay! I love this story. <3

What I'm wondering is how you chose the clans. So how did you choose the clans? xD Like.. the people in them?

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 03:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] squidney87
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ok. Makes sense. :D

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 03:33 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] mewbladexxx
I knew I was in Cobblehaterz! *Fistpump* So... It seems like I'm in on a rebellion against my clan? :O Wow! Exciting, keep it up, Voo! :D

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 03:37 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] simba597ty
Ooh! So exciting! Hoping the rebels band together and do something...interesting~
Great job so far.

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 05:00 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jaycana
Omigosh, another chapter!

Personally, I really like the Cobblehaterz clan...(rebellions ftw~)

Moar, please. <3

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 05:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jaycana
What? More rebellions? Mwahahaha I am going to love this~

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 10:08 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] purplesky
Ooh I like it so far! I like Boulderfist the best I think. They seem like a fun clan.

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 11:57 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] drama_llama1
I LOVE THIS SOOOOOO MUCH! Take your time writing it though :) also the people who you listed in each clan are they the only people in that clan?
So I am either in Wolfington or the Vacationeers ( YUS )
Edited Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 11:58 am (UTC)

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 09:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] drama_llama1
Oops :) forgot the Ulaya clan Xp

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 03:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] anonymousrose
:D So exciting *nodnod* I'm also very curious why I covered those papers when Mew came by x3 ^-^ Also guude luck with your exams!

Date: Sunday, January 26th, 2014 04:44 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] anonymousrose
:0 Now you got me more curious dang it x3

Date: Saturday, January 25th, 2014 04:30 pm (UTC)
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I like where this is going OuO
Can't wait for more! :D

Date: Sunday, January 26th, 2014 06:22 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] attomic7kitten
Is it too late to be included? I have already uploaded my character if I'm not too late. From what you've told us about the clans, I'll probably end up in Wolfington, or maybe in Ulaya

Date: Sunday, January 26th, 2014 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] attomic7kitten
Thank you. Sorry for any inconvenience I may have caused. I just recently learned about the salad. I like it here.

Date: Monday, January 27th, 2014 05:27 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ficeny
Eeep I'm in a fic! :D (super late comment, I know, but I just found out you posted two chapters already) Looks really interesting hehe! Can't wait for more~ I can't believe I'm in Boulderfist yay! (<.< which clan are Etho and Arkas in by the way kekeke >;D ) Good luck with your exams by the way, ganbatte! <33

Date: Wednesday, January 29th, 2014 08:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bookworm2692
First things first: THANK YOU FOR BEING THE FIRST TO PUT ME IN A FIC!!!!

When I read the first chapter, I thought "aw, Beef is probably in Vacationeers, and I'm not happy-go-lucky like them, I'm more violent, so I don't get to be in Beef's clan, dammit", but I don't care anymore. I love it, I love it all.

I like it that I'm not a rebel. I guess it's because I like proving my strength and stuff, and we wouldn't get to do that (via fighting) if we worked together. That's my logic. And also, these guys raised me. I owe them something. So why would I go against them? That's why I think I'm not a rebel (naughty Mew), but how do I know Mew is a rebel? Aren't they secretive?

Also, my last thought as I was reading was: awww, Foo are siblings!

Can you also tell us which Mindcrackers are in each clan, along with the Saladers?

Date: Friday, January 31st, 2014 06:40 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bookworm2692
Ah, ok. That makes more sense. Do you think maybe I become more suspicious as it goes on? Maybe I find out (maybe someone helps me... Idk) and announce it to whoevers in charge (Pak?), and get to execute her or something. Or maybe just help lock her up or something (sorry, mew. I love you. My character just hates "traitors"). Maybe all the clans from an alliance to get rid of the rebels. Then go back to fighting each other. Plot bunnies, get back here!

Are any other ships siblings? Mindcrack or Salad?

I'm looking forward to the next part, as you can tell

Date: Friday, January 31st, 2014 08:28 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bookworm2692
Yay, I'm glad. It's ok that we're not in the next part - we need to take a look at Ulaya and Vacationeers before anyone doubles up.

Another question (last one, I promise (I hope)): are all 26 mindcrackers in it, or just some of them?

Date: Sunday, February 2nd, 2014 09:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bookworm2692
Yay!

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