The Device
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mindcrackloveThe device
This is a giant fanfic I am making about... well, most of the mindcrackers, if not all. This is my first fanfic attempt, and I will appreciate criticism. It is very long, and will be many chapters. Sorry about the cliffhanger >:D
BdoubleO stared out into the forest. Guude had called a meeting of all Mindcrackers. According to him, Etho and Seth had been working on a device of that magic wire, 'redstone', that was supposed to improve the server. He had no idea of how it would work, and didn't want to know. With a sigh, he set off towards spawn, where Guude and the other Mindcrackers were.
"Hi guys, I have asked you to come here today because, well, Etho and Seth were... working on some strange redstone device? Um... Could you guys explain it?" Guude said, in well over his head. Etho and Seth nodded in unison, and then Seth gestured at the other redstone master.
"How about you explain it? It was your main project." The ninja nodded, and gathered his thoughts.
"So... The redstone device, that Seth and I have been working on, is a device to improve the server, specifically the players. This works to improve the way players.... act and work, I guess. This lever," Etho said, gesturing at a lever placed between he and Seth, "will activate the device. If this crashes the server, Guude has saved it, already. So don't worry!"
Nebris was curious at how such a device had been made, but did not query it. He was far from a redstone master, himself. He did notice, however, that spawn was somewhat overcrowded. This was the first time all the Mindcrackers had been together, in his knowledge. He checked he had his sword with him, just in case somebody found his name in the Death Games. He assumed at least one person would check, even though something important was going on.
Bdubs looked around. He wanted to check the Death Games building but he was too busy right at that moment. He would, however, check it straight after this magic wire was activated. He didn't see what could happen. This was Minecraft, right?
On a different server, far, far away, Rob was playing Dwarves Vs Zombies. He was explaining to the Jimmies why he didn't have Pause or Guude with him today. "They were busy with some big Mindcrack project or something. Just be quiet, and drink your juice. Or do I have to use my deathstare?" Rob said, expasterated.
Etho and Seth both knew who they would get to pull the lever. Guude was a logical choice, but he was already the server administrator. He didn't need to pull a lever. Both redstone creators were tempted to pull the lever, but had already created the devices.
"Ah, Vechs. Would you please come up and pull the lever?" Etho called, unsure if Vechs was the wisest choice. But he had already called, it was too late. Etho began feeling doubt at the wisdom of the device. What if it didn't work? What if a week had been wasted, building the device? What if it malfunctioned? What if he and Seth started looking like idiots?
Vechs walked up to the lever. He was tempted to break the lever, but he guessed Etho would kill him if he did so.
"So, I just pull the lever?" Vechs asked. Seth nodded, seeing as Etho was otherwise preoccupied. Vechs pulled the lever, and the world shattered.
This is a giant fanfic I am making about... well, most of the mindcrackers, if not all. This is my first fanfic attempt, and I will appreciate criticism. It is very long, and will be many chapters. Sorry about the cliffhanger >:D
BdoubleO stared out into the forest. Guude had called a meeting of all Mindcrackers. According to him, Etho and Seth had been working on a device of that magic wire, 'redstone', that was supposed to improve the server. He had no idea of how it would work, and didn't want to know. With a sigh, he set off towards spawn, where Guude and the other Mindcrackers were.
"Hi guys, I have asked you to come here today because, well, Etho and Seth were... working on some strange redstone device? Um... Could you guys explain it?" Guude said, in well over his head. Etho and Seth nodded in unison, and then Seth gestured at the other redstone master.
"How about you explain it? It was your main project." The ninja nodded, and gathered his thoughts.
"So... The redstone device, that Seth and I have been working on, is a device to improve the server, specifically the players. This works to improve the way players.... act and work, I guess. This lever," Etho said, gesturing at a lever placed between he and Seth, "will activate the device. If this crashes the server, Guude has saved it, already. So don't worry!"
Nebris was curious at how such a device had been made, but did not query it. He was far from a redstone master, himself. He did notice, however, that spawn was somewhat overcrowded. This was the first time all the Mindcrackers had been together, in his knowledge. He checked he had his sword with him, just in case somebody found his name in the Death Games. He assumed at least one person would check, even though something important was going on.
Bdubs looked around. He wanted to check the Death Games building but he was too busy right at that moment. He would, however, check it straight after this magic wire was activated. He didn't see what could happen. This was Minecraft, right?
On a different server, far, far away, Rob was playing Dwarves Vs Zombies. He was explaining to the Jimmies why he didn't have Pause or Guude with him today. "They were busy with some big Mindcrack project or something. Just be quiet, and drink your juice. Or do I have to use my deathstare?" Rob said, expasterated.
Etho and Seth both knew who they would get to pull the lever. Guude was a logical choice, but he was already the server administrator. He didn't need to pull a lever. Both redstone creators were tempted to pull the lever, but had already created the devices.
"Ah, Vechs. Would you please come up and pull the lever?" Etho called, unsure if Vechs was the wisest choice. But he had already called, it was too late. Etho began feeling doubt at the wisdom of the device. What if it didn't work? What if a week had been wasted, building the device? What if it malfunctioned? What if he and Seth started looking like idiots?
Vechs walked up to the lever. He was tempted to break the lever, but he guessed Etho would kill him if he did so.
"So, I just pull the lever?" Vechs asked. Seth nodded, seeing as Etho was otherwise preoccupied. Vechs pulled the lever, and the world shattered.
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Date: Tuesday, January 21st, 2014 08:27 am (UTC)And yes, you have forgotten to use the fanfiction tag but you can edit tags after posting so please do so since tagging is important.
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Date: Tuesday, January 21st, 2014 01:21 pm (UTC)But, yes. Good. More. Thanks much.
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