I have no clue what I have written but I will post it anyways..

[darknight307]

Hi! First time posting something, sorry for poor plot. Hope you enjoy! Nebris calmly sat on the couch in the living room. He was reading his favorite book for the seventh time, when he heard the door bell ring. Reluctant to stop reading, Nebris let the bell ring a second, and then a third time. Sighing loudly, he put a slip of paper in the book and set it on the coffee table beside him. Nebris put on his coat, then answered the door. "Ready?" he asked before his eyes met with Vechs' green goggles. "Where you goin Nebris?" Vechs asked in a playful tone. "None of your business, what do you want?" Nebris said removing his coat. Without answering, Vechs walked past Nebris into his home. How he got there, Nebris didn't remember, but he ended up sitting with his arms crossed in his chair, while Vechs played with the lamp that came on when you touched it next to where Nebris was sitting. "Vechs!" Nebris said, trying to grab his attention. "Sorry," Vechs replied as he laid on the couch. "Don't get comfortable," Nebris said. Vechs looked over to Nebris and saw he was clearly losing his patience. Vechs smirked as he asked, "Going to see Etho?" Nebris glared at him. "No, I was going to see Guude," Nebris replied bitterly. "Why?" Vechs asked because he is Vechs and Vechs is always curious. "To work on a project," Nebris answered. Vechs sat up. "A project? Can I help? Please!" he said so quickly he had to repeat it because Nebris didn't catch it all the first time. Nebris smirked, "So bored your begging for something to do?" Vechs nodded. "What if I say no?" Nebris asked. Vechs took off his goggles to reveal his azure eyes for the first time to Nebris. "I will be the worst thing that happens to you then.", Vechs said in such a threatening tone he caught Nebris off guard. There where rumours Vechs was the AntiChrist, and Nebris didn't want to be the one to test that. "Fine," Nebris said regretting opening the door in the first place. Vechs put his goggles back on and smiled, "Shall we go?" Nebris sighed, then got up and put his coat back on. Nebris opened the door and Vechs ran out into the cold breeze. Nebris frowned all the way to spawn town. Nebris walked with Vechs trailing behind him. When they reached the center of spawn, Vechs insisted on shopping for building supplies. Nebris tried to convince him Guude had plenty, but Vechs wouldn't give in. Vechs looked like a child in a candy shop, running from chest to chest, seeing what was inside. At BTC's Flower Shop, Nebris leaned against the wall as Vechs gave him countless things to hold. Nebris shook his head as he watched Vechs. Vechs turned to see Etho walk in the shop. He ran over. "Hi Etho!" Vechs said excitedly. "Hey Vechs," Etho said less enthusiastic than normal. "Nebris is here, he's over," Vechs turned to see Nebris was no longer standing there holding his items. Vechs turned in a circle. "He was right there!" He pointed at the wall where Nebris was previously leaning. Etho chuckled. "Hiding Nebris?" Etho shouted. No response. Etho walked off, searching for Nebris. Vechs shrugged and continued looking at flowers. Vechs had picked ten more flowers whenever he heard Etho yell, followed by the sound of a breaking pot. Vechs ran towards the noise. He turned a corner to find Etho pinned to the floor by Nebris' sword. There was a deep cut on Nebris' cheek, Vechs guessed it was where Etho had sliced him with his sword. Etho had red marks on his neck, probably where Nebris had choked him. Blood was coming through Etho's shirt where Nebris had his sword pushing him to the ground. They were both panting. A piece of broken clay was stuck in Etho's hand. "Nebris stop! Your drawing blood!" Vechs shouted. A look of such hatred was on Nebris' face. All of a sudden a look of shock appeared on his face. He sheathed his sword. Vechs gave Etho his hand. He helped Etho up, then turned to Nebris, who seemed calm compared to what just happened. Vechs stood between them to make sure nothing happened. "Well, it's been fun Etho, but you know what happens next," Nebris said calmly. Etho glared towards Nebris. Etho had something in his eyes Vechs had never seen before, fear. "Move Vechs," Etho said. Vechs was shocked, but he moved aside without arguing. Nebris took out his sword. Etho closed his eyes and took a deep breath. With one quick movement, Nebris ran through Etho with his sword. Etho's now lifeless body fell to the ground. Vechs squealed. "Why did you kill him?" Vechs asked shocked. "Revenge is sweet," Nebris said as he smiled. He walked out the door of the Flower Shop. Vechs ended up carrying all of the flowers, Nebris was too busy messing with the cut on his face. "What took you so long?" Guude asked as Nebris and Vechs approached him. "Unexpected chain of events," Nebris said ad he pointed towards Vechs, then the cut on his cheek. "Did Vechs cut you?" Guude asked in a concerned tone. "No, but I swear he is bad luck," Nebris said, lightening the mood around the three of them. Guude smiled. "Etho did it," Guude remarked. "How could you tell?" Nebris quickly felt the cut. "The shape is the same as his blade," Guude felt the cut himself. "It's deep Nebris, you should clean it before we start working." "Fine," Nebris said as he entered Guude's base to clean the wound. Vechs look at Guude. "Are you two a couple?" Vechs asked because like I said earlier, Vechs is always curious. "No! Of course not! Just don't want to have to postpone the project because he has an infection," Guude said. "Where is this project anyways?" Vechs looked around. "Hidden of course, you think we would put it in plain sight for everyone to see?" Guude shook his head disapproving that Vechs hadn't thought that. Nebris walked out, his arms full of quartz. They all walked about half a mile from Guude's base then entered a cave. They went down the cave for a good thirty feet, the turned to the left and Vechs saw it. A giant room full of spawners. Each spawner had a sign on it, saying what it spawned. It was a giant farm. "How did you do it?" Vechs asked as he spun to take it all in. "Magic," Nebris said sarcastically. "Very long story," Guude said after giving Nebris a disapproving look. "I like Nebris' answer better," Vechs said giggling. Guude rolled his eyes, let's get to work. "I'm tired," Vechs complained after a very long time of working. Nebris looked at Guude. "I think we're done for the day," Nebris said quickly. Guude nodded as he climbed down the ladder he had placed to get to one of the top farms. "Be safe," Guude said as Nebris and Vechs left. Vechs just followed Nebris to his home. Nebris unlocked the door, Vechs followed him in. Vechs stopped in the middle of the living room, seeing Etho on the couch, watching television. Nebris didn't seem to be shocked in any way. "Vechs, go sleep in my room, I can sleep on the couch," Nebris said. "You sure?" Vechs knew Nebris was tired, but not that tired. "Yes! Go," Nebris said. Vechs entered a hallway, made a left turn and went into Nebris' room. Vechs laid down on Nebris' bed and turned on his side. He saw a picture on the night stand, and being curious Vechs, picked it up. It was a picture of Etho, Nebris, and Beef. A very unhappy Beef was in the middle, Nebris was on the left, leaning against the wall like he always does, and Etho on the right with a bright smile on his face. Vechs set down the picture and closed his eyes. He fell asleep almost instantly.

Comments

[wildh10l]

Now you're going to have to write another chapter! You can't just leave me hanging with Etho on Nebris's couch! You can't! :)

Oh and some advice: Do make it into small paragraphs so it's not just one huge wall of text. And if someone's replying to someone, their answer should be on the next line. ;)

[darknight307]

I wrote paragraphs originally, but I guess when I copy and pasted it didn't come through. I'll make sure it does next chapter

[wildh10l]

Yep... Dreamwidth has the stupidest formatting. Don't worry. ;)

[hawser]

Please please please! More more more! (In the politest way possiable)

[redyellowgirl]

This is really cool! I hope there's another chapter!

[yaoi15]

No no no don't leave me hanging! You can't just leave it I have to know~!