Fic: Ghost of Mindcrack ch 1
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mindcrackloveOkay this is going to be the first chapter, I don't know how long this story will go for (how many chapters it will be). I want to know if you like it plus I would like someone to beta this for me :D anyways on to the story, Enjoy...
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http://youtu.be/Ji8G2h9xdPI
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"You can sometimes hear him haunting the streets of the deserted spawn town. Silently looking for his next victim who so kindly wanders into his domain.
He has been know for the "E" pranks onEtho's Bdoubleo's arena and Guude's elusive golden record that was stolen right after he found it.
One day he will be defeated and gotten rid of but that day is not someday soon...
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Bdubs woke in a cold sweat what in hell was that!? I could have sworn that it was... Oh no!
"GUUDE! GENERIK!" He yelled.
"Heeheehee their not here BOO" came a voice from above him. Looking around in the dark trying to find the source of the voice. Not seeing anyone he light a torch which was immediately put out
"Oooohhh naughty, naughty Bdubs trying to get a better look, that's to clever for you haha" the voice teased. Getting agitated by the voice and it's annoying laugh he tried to get up but wasn't able to.
"Hey! Let me up ya hear!" Thrashing about while the voice sighed
*sigh* "alright but that's not nearly as fun as what I wanted to do... Oh well maybe Guude will be more willing then you to play. Hahahah! But just so you don't get to him before I do" *snap* Bdubs felt the pressure on his chest triple making it hard to breath.
Crap man! I'm done for... Wait no Guude! I have to get over there before that... Thing does
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Guude walked in... "GAH!" Startled, he fell on the floor
" What the hell are you doing guy?" He squinted trying to see who scared him. He got no response.
"Hello? Guy!?" hmm... Maybe I startled myself he shrugged and kept walking into his house.
I have a feeling someones watching me he looked around suspiciously "I swear if you don't show yourself I'll..."
"Hahahah... HAHAHA!!" Was the response he received "your funny Guude" came a voice from behind his shoulder. Spinning around he couldn't see anything through the dark.
"Who are you? And what do you want with me?" He swiped at the spot the voice came from ... Silence ...
if there's one thing I learned from YouTube comments its; if you let them get to you it will only get worse he guessed that it applied here to so Guude rolled his eyes and continued walking
"Aww you're no fun! Fine I have to go. Ha ha! Oh and before I go... Bdoubleo might need your help Guude better hurry" the voice faded away laughing.
Great that worked. Bdoubleo? BDUBS! Well shit it going to be one of those nights he thought running out the door into the dark towards the arena.
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Ps... Let me know if the link doesn't work.
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http://youtu.be/Ji8G2h9xdPI
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"You can sometimes hear him haunting the streets of the deserted spawn town. Silently looking for his next victim who so kindly wanders into his domain.
He has been know for the "E" pranks on
One day he will be defeated and gotten rid of but that day is not someday soon...
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Bdubs woke in a cold sweat what in hell was that!? I could have sworn that it was... Oh no!
"GUUDE! GENERIK!" He yelled.
"Heeheehee their not here BOO" came a voice from above him. Looking around in the dark trying to find the source of the voice. Not seeing anyone he light a torch which was immediately put out
"Oooohhh naughty, naughty Bdubs trying to get a better look, that's to clever for you haha" the voice teased. Getting agitated by the voice and it's annoying laugh he tried to get up but wasn't able to.
"Hey! Let me up ya hear!" Thrashing about while the voice sighed
*sigh* "alright but that's not nearly as fun as what I wanted to do... Oh well maybe Guude will be more willing then you to play. Hahahah! But just so you don't get to him before I do" *snap* Bdubs felt the pressure on his chest triple making it hard to breath.
Crap man! I'm done for... Wait no Guude! I have to get over there before that... Thing does
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Guude walked in... "GAH!" Startled, he fell on the floor
" What the hell are you doing guy?" He squinted trying to see who scared him. He got no response.
"Hello? Guy!?" hmm... Maybe I startled myself he shrugged and kept walking into his house.
I have a feeling someones watching me he looked around suspiciously "I swear if you don't show yourself I'll..."
"Hahahah... HAHAHA!!" Was the response he received "your funny Guude" came a voice from behind his shoulder. Spinning around he couldn't see anything through the dark.
"Who are you? And what do you want with me?" He swiped at the spot the voice came from ... Silence ...
if there's one thing I learned from YouTube comments its; if you let them get to you it will only get worse he guessed that it applied here to so Guude rolled his eyes and continued walking
"Aww you're no fun! Fine I have to go. Ha ha! Oh and before I go... Bdoubleo might need your help Guude better hurry" the voice faded away laughing.
Great that worked. Bdoubleo? BDUBS! Well shit it going to be one of those nights he thought running out the door into the dark towards the arena.
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Ps... Let me know if the link doesn't work.
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Date: Friday, August 30th, 2013 10:10 pm (UTC)This was one of the other things I really enjoyed seeing on your journal. ^_^ Nice to read it once again and I would happy to beta for you... if you want... if you want someone better that's fine too. *hides in hole of shyness* I will do my best! Except right now... looking for mistakes when you got your teeth extracted about 5 minutes ago is not the best time. But indeed... I can always help <3\
EDIT: Also... your icon is just... XD (Voo on Canada day is an awesome description for it :P)
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Date: Friday, August 30th, 2013 10:33 pm (UTC)Hehe yep that was me not wanting my picture taken so I draw a face on a place and let people take pics of that :P