Fanfic - Singularity Chapter 23

[scaredykitty]

Short chapter.

Chapter 23

Vechs smirked as he leaned back, letting his consciousness wander across the server. Part of him kept an eye on TheJims and Anderz, smirking as he heard howls of pain and sobbing from Anderz. Giggling to himself, he relaxed, continuing his search for the elusive BTC.

Each cycle grew longer and longer. Eventually he hoped the cycle would break, that everyone would be under his control. But he'd never manage that if he couldn't find BTC.

Vechs growled softly, clenching his fists. BTC always managed to convince everyone he was their hero, their savior. He was the only one to remember what it was like before the first loop. What BTC had done to the server. How he had everyone tied up and doing his bidding. Vechs had tried to stop him normally, tell them what BTC was doing. But they ignored him.

So he fought fire with fire. Using the nether, he went back to before BTC took control of people, before he clouded their minds. And he did it first. They fought against him, oh they did. Each and every time. And each time they did, he got harsher with them. But it had to be done. Break their spirits so they wouldn't listen to BTC. Mold them so they'd attack BTC when they saw him. The side effects were bad, but he didn't care. He'd control them all eventually.

It was slow. It took ages to do, but once it had worked, the loops started to get longer and longer. He got better and better at it, finding people over the server before they could do anything, sending out Etho before BTC could get to them.

But BTC always figured out a way to outmaneuver him, to almost stop him. Every time. So he just tried harder. He wouldn't let BTC win and destroy everyone. Sure, he might have to do some questionable things in order to stop him, but in the long run, wasn't it better for everyone?

Not that he'd admit to anyone that he might have started enjoying it. The first few hundred cycles he had felt guilty when he had started brainwashing people more. But it got results. So he started to use it more. And when that started to cause unintended side effects in the long run, he had gotten Zisteau to help.

He was truly surprised the first time TheJims had started tearing into Guude. He had to intervene and stop him from killing him. He had tried to calm him down, but couldn't. He was just too angry to brainwash. So he threatened him. It worked, but only a bit. At first, he only watched TheJims tear into Guude out of a morbid fascination. These days well...

Vechs smirked as Anderz shrieked in pain. He could hear him hitting the ground, unmoving. TheJims knew better then to kill anyone. He idly wondered how long it would take Anderz to heal though.

As he searched across the map, looking for BTC, he idly rubbed the goggles. The goggles had been the tipping point, allowing him to brainwash people so much more effectively. When he stepped into the rift, they became a part of him, allowing him to weigh down on peoples minds. He didn't strictly need a physical form after going through the portal, but it helped to keep TheJims in line.

Thinking of TheJims made his mind wander back to him, watching him torment Anderz. Vechs whispered in TheJims' ear, before taking off to where Guude and Jsano were. He ran both hands over his clothing, smoothing it out before grinning, walking through the wall. These two always were the the worst troublemakers after BTC. He couldn't help but indulge his cruelty just a bit with them. He'd have to show them how much worse he could be then TheJims.

Chapter 1 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/132602.html#cutid1
Chapter 2 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/134400.html#cutid1
Chapter 3 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/137627.html#cutid1
Chapter 4 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/138926.html#cutid1
Chapter 5 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/141471.html#cutid1
Chapter 6 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/144302.html#cutid1
Chapter 7 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/144730.html#cutid1
Chapter 8 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/146756.html#cutid1
Chapter 9 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/150725.html#cutid1
Chapter 10 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/154480.html#cutid1
Chapter 11 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/155006.html#cutid1
Chapter 12 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/155949.html#cutid1
Chapter 13 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/159984.html#cutid1
Chapter 14 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/163301.html#cutid1
Chapter 15 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/164905.html#cutid1
Chapter 16 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/166571.html#cutid1
Chapter 17 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/170136.html#cutid1
Chapter 18 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/172112.html#cutid1
Chapter 19 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/173063.html#cutid1
Chapter 20 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/174939.html#cutid1
Chapter 21 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/177888.html#cutid1
Chapter 22 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/179303.html#cutid1

Comments

Constructive Criticism and Praise

[(Anonymous)]

So wait a minute... You broke a season barrier with Vechs but Sev, Seth, Coe, and Rel-Rel aren't past the breaking the season barrier either because 1. You just thought no one would think about it 2. I've figured something out that I shouldn't have (Which I doubt) or 3. You Just needed someone especially evil and didn't have anyone to fill that role In the existing pool of characters and you had to get a bit creative (Which I totally get). Trapped in the Nether though? On another note, I SGGEST A MOVIE BE MADE IN THIS FAN-FIC'S HONOR. This is really good btw. (In case you were unaware of your prodigious writing ability.)

Re: Constructive Criticism and Praise

[scaredykitty]

Well, I used Vechs because he at the time, had already worked with the mindcrackers in the form of them running through his maps before. Sevadus, Seth, Coe and Aureylian weren't even vaguely in the picture of mindcrackerness while writing this as of uh...some time last year.

It's not good enough for a movie. It could be better. I can see so many places it needs rewriting...