Midnight?

Friday, May 10th, 2013 12:18 am
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Fair warning this is compleatly different to my usually style.. Damn you jk rowling with your ginny and harry

Heh.. I should really go into plot making..

Feedback appreciated xD (yeah first time after reading a hell of alot of romance stuff I can't image it will be any good but I tried! :3)



Generik shivered in the cold cave, he reached over for another log to throw on the fire. He watched as the fire slowly licked the log before catching alight brightening the cave as he shuffled forward to get more warmth. They where close to spawn. The mountains hadn't been explored so they should be safe up high than below. Especially now they would be ready and waiting for them. He glared over at the cave corner at Millbee who was lying on the ground at the back of the cave

Ideot. No one betrays Generik.

He had been right though. His next actions had to be well planned. One wrong move and he could be a goner. He sighed if only Guude hadn't been there to interfere. It would have been so easy. Manipulation was so easy in a large group of people. One wrong move on someone's court only meant it was a easy target for him. Millbee had been only easier. He trusted him.. Foolish.. He shook his head only hoping Millbee would make the right choice. He didn't want more blood on his hands. It was too much effort.



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"So should be try find Beef?" Bdubs asked curiously as he leaned on Guude's tree.

He shook his head vigorously "he would count that as interfering.." Guude replied half heartily. He hated this, why did so many discussions have to fall on his head?

"So because you want to listen to angry Beef means we should let him risk his life?" Bdubs asked bluntly glaring at Guude. It was a tough decision but he obvious wasn't thinking straight.

Guude considered for a moment.. Looking up at bdubs he shrugged slowly "I honestly don't know any more guy." He sighed as Bdubs shook his head in disappointment.. "I can't please everyone B!" He grumbled standing bushing himself off as he turned in the clearing looking if Beefs tracks where still clear

"Do you not understand?" Bdubs asked quietly as Guude looked around questioningly eyebrows raised "Generik's dangerous.. Ruthless.. We can't let him get near Beef" his shoulders slumped as Guude rolled his eyes and turned around

"He can't be that bad.. He will see sense eventually, I don't want any killin'" he replied in a strict tone.. He couldn't handle more conspiracy..

Bdubs felt his face getting hot as Guude turned away dismissing his claims
so your going to be like that huh? He steped towards Guude "you want proof?"he asked angrily as he pushed Guude around slightly.. He winced as Guude hit the ground.. Maybe too hard....

Guude shook his head in shock, he had lost his balance from the sudden force he looked up at Bdubs who was now towering over him now taking his shirt off he felt his face getting red..

"Eh.. Um guy.. You really think this is the tim..." He stuttered slowly trailing off as Bdubs continued to remove his top.

His right arm was still fully bandaged from the attack from Generik he could move it freely now without a sling but the wound was still there.. Healing but slowly.. Guude sat in shock and horror.. he could only gape at the other monstrosities on his body. A large scar on his inner arm was the biggest along with multiple smaller irregular scars all over his body some where still slightly pink looking freshly healed from only a few weeks..

"What... Who..." Guude stuttered still in shock at what he was seeing as Bdubs but his lip refusing to look at him

"Generik. Who do you think." He snapped harshly as Guude looked away feeling slightly awkward now..

"When though.. I.. I really don't understand right now" Guude admitted he watched as Bdubs slowly put his shirt back on and shrugged his shoulders. He sat on the ground next to Guude and sighed now to look like a ideot.. Well done you.. He thought slowly trying to collect his thoughts.

"When we had our fight. We started the Bteam.. He was.. Protective I s'pose" he explained as Guude sat listening intently while prodding a stick he found in the dirt "I started saying how I shouldn't of been a Ideot.. Go make it up to you.. He flipped, he didn't want me leaving. What better way than to do this. Make me feel... I don't know..."

Guude's brain was still cycling all this information.. Generik did this? To him.. How did I miss this kind of abuse?

"I'm sorry guy.. I shouldn't of started that argument.. Otherwise this would have never happened" he admitted putting a hand on his and squeezing it gently

Bdubs gave a small smile and shook his head " I should have never got involved with him.. I never should have trusted him either." He shrugged as Guude frowned

"We need to go back.. Looks like I have to up my game.." Guude sighed closing his eyes as some sunshine broke through the trees "it's so quiet though.. I miss having my own time.." He sighed again relaxing in the sun while it was there. this forest is too dark and not many places let sun through... But this clearing is a nice place though. He thought maybe I should come hear more often..

"Just don't tell anyone will you.." Bdubs mumbled looking away from Guude "I.. They don't need to know the details of the insanity.."

Guude shook his head slowly "it's fine.. Our little secret" he chuckled quietly as they both enjoyed the sun.


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Kurt froze as he heard giggling he held his axe up slowly to protect himself if anything popped out between the trees, he nervously stepped thought the forest as he pushed his helmet up slightly farther to see clearly, Wolfie crouched by his feet ears madly trying to find the source of the noise.
He smiled at the wolf as it got up standing in a direction looking back and forward to Kurt and the trees his hearing was superb, he was a smart wolf. Kurt nodded silently at the wolf as they took of cautiously in the direction of the noise, he held his breath as he reached a small clearing looking between the trees he saw Guude and Bdoubleo sitting on the ground talking he shook his head who did you think it was.. Generik? He rolled his eyes at him being so scared by it.. Wolfie only sat very pleased with himself for finding the noise, yipping happily as kurt gave him a bone for a treat when he was sure they had traveled enough to give the others privacy.

Kurt began the laborious task of wood collecting again as Wolfie lay close by making short work of the bone knawing on it noisily thoroughly enjoying his treat. Kurt sighed it had been his turn to collect fire wood today, it was a boring task to say the least and extremely mind numbing.. Having only iron tools didn't help either he let his mind wander thinking how much quicker and easier it would be to havea efficiency enchantment on the axe...

"Having fun?" A voice whispered in his ear tickling him slightly as Kurt gasped loudly in shock and fear, he turned quickly holding up his axe ready to defend himself, his eyes squinting at the voice who was now roaring with laughter "sorry it was too good a opportunity Kurt.."

Kurt glared at Zisteau jokingly as the pigman gave him sympathetic eyes from the heart attack inducing joke he just pulled "next time give me some warning!" He stuttered quietly lowering his axe and wiping his forehead, it was exhausting work..

Zisteau looked around the small section of the forest he had managed to cut down, he stretched his muscular arms out in front of him cracking his fingers, he was only of the few the same hight of Kurt, not in his thin lanky frame but a powerful muscular one he slightly envied.. It would, make everything alot easier than this his stick arms.. He was one the best fighters in the group, compared to Kurt's only help being behind the group with him bow, Zisteau's experience with Vechs and dangerous situations made him a successful tactician and one of the best fighters. Along with being a 'lava expert' he had once joked.

"I will, I see you seen the love birds then?" Zisteau poked jokingly. Smiling at the uncomfortable Kurt who now knew he had been caught snooping..

"Ugh.. I.. I didn't mean to.." He stuttered before seeing the pigmans mischievous smile when he relaxed slightly it was a joke again... "I imagine you did, shouldn't you be hunting food?" He asked teasing now he understood the pigmans intention

"Yeah, I have been" he admitted proudly "pft.. give me more of a challenge.. After all i get distracted easy.." He admitted slyly giving Kurt a strange look which made him squirm slightly

"Ugh.. By what?" He asked cautiously as Zisteau chuckled moving forward slightly as Kurt backed away. He didn't look where he was going and winced as he hit his head off a tree he ended up walking backwards into. He gasped slightly as he opens his eyes to Zisteau's face inches from his with the same strange look of what he guessed was longing in his eyes he felt his face go red quickly..

"Come to the clearing tonight. The one you saw... You will find out.." He whispered grinning as Kurt only got more red slightly wide eyed as Zisteau quietly leaned in and kissed him suddenly, Kurt closed his eyes instinctively trying to calm his heart and let his instincts take over.. as he felt his heart ready to explode in excilleration. He could feel Zisteaus smile as he put his arm slowly around his waist and pulled him closer gently, he could feel his warmth through his shirt making his even more red.. shocked as he pulled away suddenly ending the moment..


The pigman was grinning looking extremely pleased with himself as Kurt slowly opened his eyes blushing furiously and breathing like he had just ran a marathon. he was staring in slight shock at what just occurred. Zisteau smiled and winked slyly "midnight" he chuckled as he began to jog off into the distance of the forest towards camp

Kurt stood for a few seconds trying to let his brain comprehend what just happened... Looking at Wolfie who was only staring at him with a "really kurt? Your that slow?" Kind of look

"Shut up Wolfie..." He muttered wandering around trying to remember what he was doing was that really my first kiss.. With Zisteau.. Does that mean? He blushed again furiously at the thought of Zisteau returning his feelings.. Wolfie gave a small yip tearing him from his thoughts as he looked.
It was beginning to get dark.. Time to head back to camp.. Midnight was closer than ever now..

Date: Thursday, May 9th, 2013 11:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] voufreail
Aww BOO was abused :'( it's good he has Guude to comfort him also ooh team single malt scotch lets see where this goes <3 I really love this part it's so tender

Date: Thursday, May 9th, 2013 11:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] voufreail
To many feels can't hold

......

*explodes from all the feels*

Date: Thursday, May 9th, 2013 11:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] voufreail
I think in almost every story there is a character that has a hard life and we all feel bad for them in this case it's Bdubs :( but they help the story have feels

Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 12:02 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] voufreail
What would BOO call it? i know Climb or maybe climb 2 no... climb 1 to many climbs to choose from >.

Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 12:02 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] scaredykitty
Poor BDoubleO! Don't want anything bad to happen to him! Want to hug him now, awww.

Also squee adorable kisses.

Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 01:20 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
:,( poor BdoubleO... but D'AWWWWW! <3 I love Single Malt Scotch! So cute! *blushes like crazy* :D

Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 02:07 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kappa77
*flails because I've finally got the time to continue reading this and it's so good!

One thing in confused on, they're in the Twilight Forest, right?

And make sure that when you use "he", it's clear we know who you're talking about.

Oh, and as I was reading, I found that you sort of have the habit of using ".." instead of a comma. Just thought I'd point it out.

And, like ampersand (is that her name? Idk) said in a comment on an earlier part, if you would like someone to beta or would like help of any kind, I'm happy to be of assistance. :)
Edited Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 02:29 am (UTC)

Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 10:18 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kappa77
Ah, okay. I understand, but the offer still stands for any fic :)

Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] pagat
ovo
/Plops down here
/Chinhands

Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] pagat
Something like this. I'm enjoying this fic so much all I can do is grin fondly, is what I'm trying to get across.

Date: Friday, May 10th, 2013 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] pagat
Well, that's just no fair. I've got a soft spot for fluff and Zisteau. /Pouts

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