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 So we're approaching the final arc of Fated, and I'd say we're maybe ten chapters away from the end (don't quote me on that). Our adventure is almost at its end, but it only gets worse BETTER from here. I mean...what could go wrong?

Chapter list: http://tanadin.dreamwidth.org/382.html
Map of the continent: http://tanadin.deviantart.com/art/Fated-map-544073443
Character status spreadsheet: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1RKoeOLYhQctmZ5McNHc_kid0tjfb1BxyuD8i95FmFQE/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter Seventy-Eight

Kingdom of Kalt’on, Minecraftia. November 15, year 573. Time instance 483Z.

“Are you sure you have to go?” Shriker asked sadly.

Iirkolav nodded. “Not all of the Hostiles are dead yet. We can’t rest until they’ve all fallen.”

“What will you do once you’ve killed them all, though?”

“I don’t know. Rebuild Dalania, probably.” Iirkolav shrugged. “It’s a starting point. I haven’t thought too much about it. Nia over there is the heir to the throne, so it only makes sense.”

Nia felt a shiver run through her as it always did whenever she remembered that. I’m the heir to the Dalanian throne. Once this is all over, I’ll be queen. It was a strange feeling.

Shriker’s eyebrows rose. “Really? No wonder…” He trailed off, thoughtful. “Well, if you need any help at any point, know you have an ally in Kalt’on. It’s time we stopped being so cut off from the world. It would be good to have a trading partner, as well…no one is going to trust us, not for a long time, at least.”

Iirkolav nodded and shook Shriker’s hand. “Thank you for helping us dethrone Kyilld. We’ve put a major dent into the Hostiles.”

“No, thank you. We never would have won without your help.” Shriker stepped forward and shook Nia’s hand as well. “Best of luck to all of you.”

“Thank you. We’ll need it.” Onai told him, nodding.

Shriker paused in front of Arra before stepping forward and giving her a hug. “You’re sure you have to go with them?”

“I’m sure, Shriker. I’m one of the prophecy or whatever, right? Don’t worry, I’ll be back.” She grinned widely. “Of course, I’ll have some more stories to tell and probably a few more scars.”

Shriker laughed and shook his head. “Never change, old friend.”

“Yes, your majesty.” She bowed sarcastically and he snorted.

“I’m never going to get used to that.”

“Good.” She hit his shoulder. “Now get back to monarching. Put this place back together.”

“I will.” Shriker said his goodbyes to the group once more before going back inside, his too-large purple cloak dragging on the ground behind him.

Iirkolav turned to the group. “Are we ready to go?”

Nia looked around and nodded. “Yeah, I think we are. Anyo-”

“Wait!”

Everyone looked curiously at the unfamiliar voice belonging to the girl running quickly towards them, but Onai stepped forward. “Kera!”

“Wait!” She repeated, skidding to a halt in front of Onai. “I wanted to thank you for not killing me when you had the chance. I do kinda appreciate living.”

Onai shrugged. “You deserved to live. It’s not really a big deal.”

“I know, but…” Kera unbuckled the belt around her waist and handed it to Onai, sword, sheath, and all. “I wanted you to have this.”

Onai raised an eyebrow. “What is this?”

“It’s an old family heirloom, but I never really liked it and I feel like it belongs with you more.”

Onai carefully pulled the sword slightly out of its sheath to reveal its dark blade, glinting in the dim moonlight. “What is this made of?”

“I have no idea.” Kera admitted. “It’s a lot stronger than iron, though.”

A blade of darkness and shadow, created by someone who had no business creating magical weapons.

Onai nodded and sheathed it again, replacing his own sword belt and handing it to Marcus (who looked really happy to just have a new weapon despite the fact that he was already carrying an insane amount of the things). “Thank you. I’ll use it well.”

Kera nodded. “Good luck.” She paused, tilting her head as if listening, the turned to Axid. “You take good care of him, alright? He’s got a good soul.”

Axid nodded. [I will. Don’t worry.]

Kera smiled and stepped backwards, vanishing into the shadows.

Axid raised an eyebrow at Onai. [Who was that?]

“A friend. I’ll explain as we walk.” He turned to Iirkolav and Nia. “I think we can get going.”

Iirkolav nodded and turned to the group. “Let us leave this place, then. Onwards!” With that, Mokdal roared and took to the skies, followed quickly by Nessy, and they started to walk, down the streets of Dae’vos and out into the desert.

~~~

Queen of the greatest kingdom to ever see the light of day. That’s your destiny, Nia.

Nia shivered as the voice she had been hearing spoke softly to her as they walked north through the desert, both dragons flying overhead.

What makes you say that?

You’re the heir to the Davion throne, and Dalania was the greatest kingdom. The only reason it fell was due to reasons out of their control. But once Iilthrid is free, he won’t be causing that again, will he?

Nia wondered, not for the first time, what the voice wanted with her. It was always whispering, always trying to convince her that she was better than she had ever imagined that she was. It wasn’t necessarily unwelcome, only strange. She had no idea where it was coming from and was too afraid to ask the others about it. What would she even say? Oh hey, guys, I’m hearing voices in my head. Is that normal?

No. Bad plan.

You’re more than anyone can realize. Even you are struggling to see. But you can be the greatest ruler Dalania ever had, rebuilding it better than it ever was before. Perhaps you could even be queen of the world.

As fun as that would be, no. Nia shuddered at the thought. Her, ruling the world? That sounded like a recipe for disaster.

You’re greater than you give yourself credit for. Someone needs to unite the world, and you’re the best suited for the job. Who else could? Adrian? No. He’s not cut out to rule.

Iirkolav, for one.

Iirkolav’s time is long past. He was meant to live two hundred years ago, not now.

Skera. Samuel. Shred. Anyone would be better than me, really.

Don’t sell yourself short.

Before Nia could continue to argue with the voice, she noticed Nessy flying lower to the ground and landing next to a rock. She scratched at it with her claws briefly before shaking herself and taking off again.

Okay. That was weird. Nia shrugged it off, though, focusing on walking instead of thinking about Nessy or the voice in her head.

Claws of darkness, voice of insanity.

Less than half an hour later, however, her thoughts were once more interrupted by that nagging little voice in her head.

You deserve more than this- walking through the desert, feet aching, with random nobodies told that they’re worth something by some words spouted by an old bronze dragon. So many of your number have already fallen. What’s to say that there’s actually anything to these people?

Nia blinked in realization. The voice was right, she realized. They were all just people. They weren’t really special in any way…

Except for you.

No way. Nia shook off the feeling that the voice had been pulling over her. I’m no better than the others. We’ve lost people a lot better and worse than me. I’ve just been lucky, and they’ve been protecting me because without me, the prophecy is completely void.

Why do you think that is? Why do you think that it’s you that the entire prophecy hinges on?

I… Nia didn’t really have a response to that.

You are the only one that can shoot Kaen no Mai. It chose you, Nia. It chose you because you are special. You are a Davion, and that makes you superior.

Does it…? Something felt wrong with what the voice was saying, but…

No! The thought exploded across her mind. A certain family isn’t better than any other. I don’t know who or what you are, but you’re wrong. I’m only as good as I make myself.

The voice fell silent at that, and Nia felt a feeling of victory rise in her chest. So it can be silenced with reason. That’s good to know.

Hours later, at dawn, Iirkolav motioned for them to make camp. He waved for Mokdal and Nessy to land (oddly enough, Nessy had stayed in dragon form all day, despite usually preferring human form) as everyone stopped and sat in the sand, resting their tired legs.

Why does Iirkolav lead this group and not you, Nia? He’s not in the prophecy. His time is long past.

Oh, shut up.

Once the tent she shared with Nessy was set up, she sat down and rummaged through her bag to try and find her pillow. Nessy was likely going to be sleeping outside in her dragon form, which made the tent feel somewhat empty, but Nia decided to enjoy how decluttered it felt for once.

As she pulled her pillow out, her hand bumped into something rough and hard. She frowned slightly, pulling the object out of her bag and looking it over for a few seconds, remembering where she had obtained it. She shrugged and put it back, setting the bag down. She turned away and crawled into her sleeping bag, not closing her eyes despite her tiredness.

It was a shame she wasn’t turned around, or she might have seen something that would have saved them a certain amount of tragedy.

The stone in her bag glowed faintly red, the spirit inside laughing hysterically to himself where none could hear, or so he thought.

In the nearest tent, Onai shivered, knowing what would happen and knowing that any attempt to interfere would only make things worse.

Heart aching, he curled up to sleep as well, knowing it would take him hours despite Axid’s close proximity and her usual calming effect on him. He tried to focus on her breathing instead of his bloody and deadly thoughts, but he knew even that could not distract him from the endgame that was fast approaching…

-~-

Blame buried his face in a pillow and screamed into it at the top of his lungs, making every Mindcracker in the room jump. Vechs had been startled by the appearance of a rock in Nia’s bag and the bad feeling it gave him, and had gotten Blame’s attention regarding it.

Its red glow only confirmed what they both had been suspecting, and while Blame screamed his fury, Vechs slowly raised his eyes to look at his friends.

“Nia has Kaltaerion.” He spoke in almost a whisper. “She has the stone his spirit is contained in and I can almost guarantee he’s been whispering into her mind, trying to drive her insane. No wonder she’s been so jumpy lately…” A shiver ran down Vechs’ spine as the room fell silent, staring as the horror of the situation set in.

The future queen of Dalania was being influenced by Kaltaerion Davion, one of the most evil and insane beings to ever live.

“Oh shit.” Nebris whispered.

“’Oh shit’ doesn’t BEGIN to cover it.” Blame raged. “Do you have ANY idea what this could DO to Nia? To the entire fucking team? They’re DEAD, Nebris! THEY’RE ALL GOING TO FUCKING DIE TO KALTAERION DAVION!”

“They won’t die!” Aureylian protested. “He’s clearly not taken over her, right? And if she’s smart, she’ll throw that rock out before he gets too far.”

“She probably doesn’t realize it’s the rock!” Blame roared. “We know! We know and there’s nothing we can do to stop this!”

Vechs looked down into his orb again, watching Nia drift slowly into sleep.

No...

Date: Saturday, January 23rd, 2016 07:22 pm (UTC)
eclipse3: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eclipse3
FUUUUCK YOOOOU!!!!!
G.C. (::)(::)(:

Date: Saturday, January 23rd, 2016 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
. . . I don't understand why would anyone be lugging around a rock.
-Anon Cami

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 12:06 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
But still, she found it in a cave. It's not like this rock is anything special as far as she knows. She really doesn't have a reason to carry it.
-Observing Anon

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 12:54 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] r7
Well, I mean, the rock has been shown to exhibit mind-manipulating abilities, right? Who's to say it can't compel someone to pick it up? We know that it's certainly powerful enough, what with it giving someone demonic powers and all....

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 05:13 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Couldn't Kaltaerion compel any of the other people who've come by to pick him up? I know the descendants came by soon after the rock was lost, but still, he couldn't have known Nia was coming.
-Anon Cami

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 06:15 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
So he can't compel someone then go to another more suitable candidate as he pleases?
-Anon Cami

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 12:14 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Can't Vechs just toss a note at Iirkorlav the next time they kill a hostile? Or are there steps to prevent things of relevance from going with him? Because if he can give him a cat stuffed animal, he should be able to give him a note.
-Observing Anon

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 12:56 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] r7
The reason why they can't do much is because the Vortex/The creators/Norazdomu/The ancient laws/The universe is stopping them from interfering. Vechs is barely allowed to go down because of the orbs as it is, there's no way something as significant as providing information, particularly that information, would be allowed.
Edited Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 12:56 am (UTC)

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 03:15 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
As soon as the rock was mentioned, only one though crossed my mind, and probably everyone else's reading this "OH SHIT!"

Onai can obviously sense Kaltaerion's negative presence so why doesn't he speak up about it? Are the shadows preventing him from interfering?

Also I think that sword that Onai just received from Kera has something to do with Kaltaerion; it's most likely forged from obsidian and could be a weapon that he forged when he was constructing the Nether portal that unleashed hell the first time.

- Scara

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 03:57 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Goddammit Tanadin! Why does it have to be 'do you want the bad news or the worse news'? >.<

You're getting too good at this evil malarkey.

- Scara

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 04:35 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Here, have a complimentary Angry Mob torch.
-Observing Anon

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 11:52 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thanks *brandishes torch*

- Scara

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Here, have this pitchfork as well. Remember, if she tries to stop you from burning down her house, just stab her with it.
-Observing Anon

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Tanadin you could not summon any kind of water elementalist to put out any fires we may cause.

Understood Observing Anon.

- Scara

Date: Tuesday, January 26th, 2016 02:43 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
But is your house? Or your friends? Or your family? Are you pitchfork proof? If so, can you interact with the world around you? Or do you just burn it, melt it, and pass through it? It sounds like it sucks to be made of fire. How do you type on a computer or phone?
-Obseving Anon

Date: Tuesday, January 26th, 2016 01:44 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tdscott8
You'll probably die to the fire. Like how you did to that fire in UHC. =]

Date: Tuesday, January 26th, 2016 02:56 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
How to burn a Tanadin: an easy step by step guide

1. Refer to Scott and learn all of Tanadin's weaknesses and limits

2. Plan accordingly while noting all of revealed weaknesses

3. If plan fails, use nuke. Nukes with there own easy to use manual will be available shortly

4. Take anything that looks like it might be a disintegrated Tanadin remain and burn it again for good measure

This book is a proud supporter of the Angry Mob. If you have any plans that will work on a less extreme level than a nuke, please leave a message below. A representative of the Angry Mob will be in contact shortly.

-Observing Anon

Date: Tuesday, January 26th, 2016 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
So in other words, 'Kill and apply the last parts of the Joan of Arc protocol . . . Burning again and again after death'
-Anon Cami

Date: Tuesday, January 26th, 2016 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Basically.
-Observing Anon

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 05:02 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I think I'll like to see what happens if Onai does try to stop it. If he knows it's going to get worst, does that mean he knows from prior experience?
-Anon Cami

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 07:06 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
NO NIA DON'T LISTEN TO IT! PLEEEEEEEEEASE!!! THROW THE ROCK AWAY!!! Poor Blame. Poor Mindcrackers.

And I don't want this book to be over! I've been reading it like clockwork for over six months, it can't end! But I guess I has to. :(

-the lurkiest lurker

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 08:41 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
All good things must come to an end. Like people. Who are characters in stories that we are emotionally attached to and then die suddenly and tragically. All the feels will soon be very real. All of them.
-Observing Anon

Date: Tuesday, January 26th, 2016 01:43 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tdscott8
Tune in for RiR! I can confirm its going to be a... How you say... "Blast" *smirk*

Date: Tuesday, January 26th, 2016 08:08 pm (UTC)
tdscott8: (Default)
From: [personal profile] tdscott8
I was trying to give a comment that insinuated I knew what the story was about.

I don't.

I don't even know what insinuated means.

Date: Wednesday, January 27th, 2016 09:53 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Synonyms include implied or suggested, heavily hinting at.
-Observing Anon

Date: Sunday, January 24th, 2016 10:06 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] darkangel4182
GODDAMNIT TANADIN YOU SLY DEVIL WHY DOES NIA EVEN HAVE THE STONE AND WHY IS SHE LISTENING TO IT AND DAMN YOU TOO KALTAERION ROT IN THAT RED STONE OF YOURS

*ahem*

In other thoughts, Blame really hates Kaltaerion, Tarsen is going to be out of the fight(aw) and stuff.

Date: Monday, January 25th, 2016 12:14 pm (UTC)
the_mysterious_m: (Default)
From: [personal profile] the_mysterious_m
All I could think of was "shred is an ashes horn skull blade. Kaltaerion Is going to be PISSED.

Also, Kal is also responsible in a way for shed's existence. If he hadn't destroyed all of those skull blades, Blame wouldn't have fought in theWar of the shattered sands, meaning Guude probably wouldn't have fond him. Funny how that works out.

...I'm going to be SAD when this is over. You've created such a cool world.

Date: Monday, January 25th, 2016 12:16 pm (UTC)
the_mysterious_m: (Default)
From: [personal profile] the_mysterious_m
What could go wrong? How about EVERYTHING.

Every
Single
Thing.

Date: Tuesday, January 26th, 2016 12:09 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Basically. Have a complimentary Angry Mob torch and pitch fork.
-Observing Anon

Date: Wednesday, January 27th, 2016 03:23 pm (UTC)
the_mysterious_m: (Default)
From: [personal profile] the_mysterious_m
Thank you, but I have a better thing in mind.

Date: Thursday, January 28th, 2016 06:58 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Do tell if you need help or numbers. I'm now curious.
-Observing Anon

Date: Saturday, January 30th, 2016 01:17 am (UTC)
the_mysterious_m: (Default)
From: [personal profile] the_mysterious_m
Well, I have numbers covered... Mwahahaha. Hahahaha. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

Date: Friday, January 29th, 2016 08:33 pm (UTC)
the_mysterious_m: (Default)
From: [personal profile] the_mysterious_m
A better question is: What could possibly go right?

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