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This one is a bit on the shorter side compared to some of the others, but I really like how it turned out! As always, feel free to leave comments or constructive criticism <3



Day 12: Making Out


It was a Saturday afternoon, much like any other. BdoubleO and Guude had just finished eating lunch at a local fast food restaurant, and were now leaving the establishment to head back to one of their homes, and continue their date, most likely with a movie.


"So, what did you think of the food?" BdoubleO asked Guude as he held the door of the restaurant open for his boyfriend.


"Eh, it was okay I guess. About as good as you'd expect a fast food joint to be" Guude said with a cheery expression on his face, as he exited the building. BdoubleO and Guude checked both ways before crossing the street, and when they evaluated it was safe, Guude began to cross. However, BdoubleO realized his shoe was untied, and stopped to tie before crossing the road. After his shoe was tied he started to run across the street to catch back up with Guude, not bothering to look out for cars this time. A grave mistake.


The sound of tires screeching and rubber skidding against the road was the last thing BdoubleO heard, before he was slammed in the side by a small vehicle, with a single passenger.


Black. All BdoubleO could see was black.


Aw shit, I'm not dead am I... He thought to himself. BdoubleO then began to hear a noise, it was faint, but it was there. A slow, rhythmic beeping. It was calming, and made BdoubleO want to simply rest. However as it got louder, other noises began to be heard as well. The sound of, someone crying? BdoubleO struggled to open his eyelids to see what was happening, and after quite a few minutes he successfully did so.


Looking around with his limited movement he saw that he wasn't wearing his own clothes, rather a blue hospital gown. He could now also feel and see that he was on what appeared to be a hospital bed. Finally BdoubleO saw where the source of the crying was coming from. He saw the figure of his boyfriend Guude, leaning against the bed, balling his eyes out. Tears flowing down his cheeks from his emerald green eyes.


Using what little energy he had in him, BdoubleO went to reach out to Guude, wanting so badly to comfort his boyfriend, however all he could do was raise his wrist slightly, only to have it fall back onto the bed. The noise of his hand hitting the bed did seem to be enough to attract Guude's attention.


"Holy shit, BDubs you're awake!" Guude said in astonishment, tears still running down his. BdoubleO could simply give a smile as a response.


“Hey… Did a train come rushing down the street or something?” BdoubleO said, trying to smile comfortingly at Guude, but he winced slightly as he moved his face to do so.

“Shut up, you… I can’t be fucking mad at you, BDubs, I’m sorry, you just got hit by some asshole in a car. Are you sure talking’s a good idea if ya can’t even smile without hurting?” Guude asked, moving closer to BdoubleO, but clearly restraining himself from touching him so he wouldn’t accidentally hurt him.


“A car? Man, it felt a lot worse than a car,” BdoubleO told Guude, who laughed half-heartedly, much to BdoubleO’s disappointment. Hearing Guude laugh right now for real would be wonderful, just to let him know he wasn’t going to worry himself to death over him. “Guude, I’ll be fine, don’t worry. A week or two, and we’ll be doing the exact same thing, going out to lunch and having a nice movie night at my place. That sound good?”


“Well, it would, but I think it might be a bit more than two weeks, Mr. DoubleO,” a doctor chimed in from the entrance. “You’ll likely be bedridden for well over a month, maybe two, and a good deal of physical therapy after that. Unfortunately, of all the cars you could’ve gotten hit with, you got hit by someone going well over the speed limit, so you took much more of a battering than was expected by a general car crash.”


BdoubleO felt Guude tense up at the news, and he tried to move his hand over to comfort Guude, but the effort caused him all pain and no results. He sighed angrily at being so helpless, but he laid back on his pillow as the doctor kept blabbing on. BdoubleO couldn’t care less at this point. He just wanted to go back to being with Guude, and not being a man-sized sack of potatoes to carry around.


BdoubleO finally decided it was a good time to find some food when he began to realize there was the distinct taste of iron in the back of his throat and his tongue was covered in a filmy layer of saliva, which he couldn’t do anything to fix. His luck that day was apparently phenomenal, as Guude had been forced to leave not five minutes ago because of some stupid rule about visiting times and that BdoubleO needed his rest.


“Hey, doc! Anybody! Can somebody come over here please?” BdoubleO called out as loud as he could, which was barely any louder than his normal voice’s volume. When he received no answer or acknowledgement, he tried yelling once again, then a third time, to no result.


“Hell’s blazes…” he muttered, coughing slightly and feeling the iron taste work it’s way back up his throat, the feeling of which made him feel like he needed to throw up. Eventually he managed to hold down his lunch, and with a good deal of effort, BdoubleO looked at the clock at the bedside, which read 10:45 PM.

“May as well sleep if no one’s gonna give me any damn food…” BdoubleO muttered, then attempting to move ever so slightly so he wasn’t so cramped, which only resulted in him being uncomfortable and in more pain, he closed his eyes to sleep.


BdoubleO woke up the next morning, his mouth more dry than the day before, to a room filled with doctors in scrubs, hustling around and doing something.


“What the hell are all of you doing in here?” BdoubleO asked, alarmed. One doctor paused to talk, but immediately was told to keep moving.

“We’re going to be re-setting all of the bones that you’d broken yesterday, Mr. DoubleO,” the same doctor from yesterday told him a moment later, appearing by his left side. “We’ll have to put you under anesthesia, of course, unless you’d like to feel everything?” BdoubleO grumbled something about breaking his bones, but he eventually agreed to go without a fight (although, in his condition, he wouldn’t be doing much).


Days passed and BdoubleO fell into a routine of eating very infrequently, mostly by the fault of the staff not bringing him late night snacks, saying he needed rest, sleeping, and visiting with Guude whenever the hospital’s visiting hours came around.

He missed being able to touch Guude. He’d regained very limited use of his arms and hands, so he could hold Guude’s hands, but not for very long, and it just wasn’t the same as being able to hug him and kiss him and lean on his shoulder when he was tired. He could tell Guude was a bit on edge about that, too, from the times he’d almost laid his head down on BdoubleO’s chest like he occasionally did when they watched movies on the couch, then flinched away when he realized what he was doing.


Eventually, the day finally came that marked his two month stay in the hospital, it also meant that he could officially leave the hospital, much to his own relief. Of course he's will have to come in for weekly physicals, and physical therapy sessions, in addition to if he ever felt even the slightest problem with his body. It was annoying having to do all these things, but it was definitely a step in the right direction.


Upon his exit from the hospital, he was greeted by Guude, who could have him what he considered to be the lamest hug ever. Guude simply wrapped his arms around BdoubleO's waist, with only the inside of his elbows actually touching BdoubleO's body, worried that he might hurt him, even after all this time.


The two got into Guude's car, which they now both found much to be a much safer mode of transportation than walking. They went back to Guude's house, and when they arrived their Guude tried very hard to help BdoubleO get out of the car, but was simply ignored, BdoubleO saying he had it.


The pair went inside, and BdoubleO sat right down on the large brown couch Guude owned, his legs already exhausted, as they had not been exercised in many weeks.


"Mm, it sure is nice to be out of that dang hospital, now I can actually spend some quality time with you Guude, without being interrupted by one of those friggin doctors every minute" BdoubleO said, while he tried his best to stretch out his legs without hurting them.


"BDubs, you know the doctors were only trying to help you. It's not their fault that they had to check up on you so often" Guude said, sitting down next to BdoubleO on the large brown couch, however on the opposite side, much to BdoubleO's dismay.


"It's just frustrating how they always seemed to show up when I didn't want 'em, but whenever I needed somethin' they weren't there!" BdoubleO said, attempting to scooch closer to Guude, however he was stopped in his tracks.


"BDubs just, stay where you are. I don't want you getting hurt anymore than you are, I don't think I can handle it..." Guude said, lightly putting a hand on BdoubleO's chest in an attempt to stop him from moving.


"Guude, I know you have good intentions, but I was in that darn hospital for two whole months, and right now all I want to do is be close to you" BdoubleO said in response, removing Guude's hand from his chest, and scootching closer so he could be next to Guude. "C'mon Guude, please, for me?" BdoubleO pouted, sticking out his lower lip.


“I… Are you sure you’ll be okay?” Guude asked, his defense clearly falling away with BdoubleO’s request. “I don’t want you to get hurt is all, and if you can’t promise you won’t, then I don’t want to, even if I might want to… A lot, frankly.”

“Guude, don’t be a selfless bastard right now of all times! You haven’t been able to so much as kiss me for two months, clearly you want something to happen, and so do I. I’ll be fine, don’t worry about me,” BdoubleO said, trying to convince him, only to have Guude look away for a moment. “Dang it, I’m sorry, Guude, I didn’t mean to be so ha-” BdoubleO was cut off by Guude quickly turning his head around and cupping BdoubleO’s face in his hands, kissing him deeply, pushing closer to him as he let go of his hesitance.


BdoubleO was taken aback for a few seconds, then he began to kiss Guude in return, two months worth of pent up feelings escaping as he kissed Guude more forcefully, pushing his tongue into Guude’s mouth and wrapping his arms around Guude’s neck and on his upper back, pulling him closer to him until they had nearly full body contact.


After many minutes of passionate kissing, they both desperately needed air, but neither wanted to stop first. They’d been apart for far too long to miss a single second with each other. Eventually, BdoubleO had to stop to breathe, coughing a bit as he gasped for air, wiping a bit of sweat off his brow. Guude was barely any better, gasping just like BdoubleO was and laying back to take a moment on the couch.


“I missed you, Boo” Guude said in between deep breaths, leaning against a corner of the couch, BdoubleO nodded, before moving over to Guude and crawling atop his body, holding him down against the couch. BdoubleO resumed the kiss, now easily dominating Guude’s mouth. After a much longer makeout session, Guude eventually pushed BdoubleO back, to take another breath.

“I missed you too” BdoubleO said, with his trademark smirk.



A/N: I'm so sorry Tac

Date: Thursday, August 13th, 2015 01:32 am (UTC)
tackytacs: (Default)
From: [personal profile] tackytacs
I forgive you two for that happy ending. and you're lucky too, because I was about to dish out some revenge

Date: Thursday, August 13th, 2015 03:48 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tackytacs
BUT HE GOT HIT BY A MOVING VEHICULAR TRANSPORT DEVICE. THAT WAS SPEEDING. If he died or some shit there would've been revenge tomorrow.

Date: Thursday, August 13th, 2015 04:57 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tackytacs
I dunno man, Clash is pretty scary when he wants to be, I'm not sure about "fragile". XD

Date: Thursday, August 13th, 2015 01:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] clashofdemonesense
I mean, I probably would've flipped out if we hadn't planned this out before he started writing it and I just would've seen "oh, hit by a bus" and then have like cried.

But, yesh, I can be angerererer, but I prefer being nice :)

Date: Thursday, August 13th, 2015 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Noooo, Bdubs, don't get hit by a train! Or a car. Whatever.

Me likey!

-the lurkiest lurker

Date: Friday, August 14th, 2015 12:04 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] peanut_emma
This has been my favourite so far.
Totally not because it actually bad pain in.
Ha.
Haha.
Nope
*shifty eyes*

Date: Friday, August 14th, 2015 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Ikr

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