Date: Monday, February 25th, 2013 03:16 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ampresand
I have to say, you have a really wonderful story going here, which could become some really, really good pieces if just one thing was changed...
I'm really sorry for bringing this up, but it's getting on my nerves and I hate to see anything interfering with the greatness of a story. The problem here is spelling and grammar errors. There are missing words, misspelled words, and some other problems. I understand that you are ESL, so I can of course excuse them, but even so, it bothers me that these problems could impede people's enjoyment of a good piece.
I have a solution; If you would be so kind as to allow me to, in a sense, beta it, I believe I could help you to make this story even better. This offer would also extend to any future stories you might write. I can always make time for editing. ^_^
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