portal chapter 2

[blue_cats]

Yay another one! there will be death.. Da..da..da!!!!

Vechs could tell the illusion was fading, seeing the rest of them looking around in confusion.

"Awww the flowers are gone." Said Aureylain sounding dejected. "Where the heck did that voice come from?" Etho asked searching for a possible source. ‘As if any of us would know‘ Vechs thought pondering the same.

"OK who did it! Give it up who made this place, and what's with the death threats!" MC shouted, causing everyone to stare at him. Vechs searched his head looking for any memory of a place alike to this. ‘wait what was that it, no nothings there‘ only a small flicker was nothing to base it off of. Nothing else was there so, deciding to say no, he said "I can't remember making anything like this do any of you guys?" A coarse of Nos rang through the room.

"Well it said it was made by one of us right? Maybe a mindcracker that's not here?" Nebris suggested "Its a possibility right?"

"Would you stop asking questions and let us answer them!" Guude yelled at him.

"Be nice Guude" Etho said "and of course its a possibility Nebris."

"Guys calm down, can we all just sit down and relax a bit?" Aureylain asked.

"Sure why not?" Asked Zisteau a hint of sarcasm in his voice. They all sat down anyways Vechs noticed Aurey and Zisteau on either side. The boxes they where sitting on forming a rough circle.

"ZZZzzzz... certainly no time to rest!" The voice thundered startling us all. "No no.. definitely not get up its time for your first challenge yes. You have five minutes to get out before the walls crush you...zzzZZZ" It went out again leaving them in confusion.

"Well get up search the dang boxes for equipment!" Guude yelled taking control yet again. Vechs and the others searched through the boxes not finding anything, but dust and old air.

" Try the walls!" Vechs shouted wiping around frantically, and running to check the walls.

"I found something!" Nebris shouted running his fingers against the wall taping it trying to figure out how it opened. The group ran over seeing it open under Nebris's fingertips.

They ran through quick as they could only to turn around and see Guude's hand reaching out for the door. <\cut>

Comments

[clashofdemonesense]

Very nice. But Guude dying.... It makes me sad. *sigh* Well, it was great besides that, so don't mind my personal tripes with this.

[blue_cats]

Well I kind of think my dreams are a bit big for a first fanfiction. but ya you should see what I wrote well my internet was down, oh that was dark! Probably because I was listening to demons and bleeding out by imagine dragons. But I hope your ok with more people dieing. You'll understand by the end I hope

[clashofdemonesense]

You're 100% a okay, guy. I've had to read some of the other sad things on here (not had to, but ya know) and it wasicj worse than one person dying. Guude's just a favorite of mine, so that's the whole big thingie with me. But what you've done so far is quite good. Keep doing awesome!

[blue_cats]

Thanks, I just nope this fic stays good on you people's board.