mindcracklove | The Boulderfist - Chapter 1

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My first fanfic. Hope y'all like it!

"She's breathing, captain!"

It had started out as a normal day aboard The Boulderfist. It was all typical, Pause was annoying Beef, Vechs was annoying Zisteau, Pyro was in lord Baj's room doing who knows what.(Although I don't think we want to know.)Kurt was on the Crow's nest, Etho was making potions, ETC. Everyone was doing their jobs. They were going through a stretch of ocean called,"The Killer Rock Stretch,"
Which is exactly what the name describes it as. Most ships that sailed in, never sailed out. But The Boulderfist had sailed through it multiple times. Captain Guude knew where all the bad rocks were, and expertly sailed around them. Then they sailed past a smaller, more compact boat, and Kurt caught a glimpse of something red, he wasn't sure what it was, and he wanted to check it out, so he sent down the Jr. spotter, BTC, to tell Guude.

"Captain Guude, may I come in?" Blame asked through the door.
"I don't see why not. The door is unlocked." Guude answered.
"Kurt saw something red in the ship on our starboard, he wants you to check it out."
"Very well, get some of the crew."

10 minutes after a, "Be right there," the captain finally emerges from the wheelhouse.

"Lets get this show on the road," Beef said impatiently.
"Indeed," Kurt agreed.

So they each got into a smaller lifeboat, and sailed to the ship. Unremarkable at best, it seemed, from the outside. They entered the wheelhouse and the first thing they saw were two bodies, both had a knife in the back of their heads. Then to the mess hall. 3 more bodies. Shot with bows. Then, when they found their way to the storage room, they found her. She had on a white dress and a velvet cape, with these emerald green eyes. Normally, the guys would have been glad to see a girl like that. What they didn't like was how the girl actually was. Her dress was torn in more place than one, and there was a large gash in her left arm. Not to mention the shackles on her arms and the gag in her mouth. Her eyes were open, not focused. Most figured she was dead, all but one observant guy by the name of Vechs. He watched her, and saw her eyes move as guude walked by. Then, just to be sure, looked to see if her chest was rising and falling. It was.

"She's breathing,captain!" vechs said enthusiastically.

At that, the girl stopped acting dead and started sobbing, afraid of what they were going to do to her.

"Hey, we aren't going to hurt you, we can help." Vechs said soothingly. Kurt then removed her gag.

"Get away from me!" She screamed,"I know what you are going to do, your friends have already killed all my friends, shackled me up, and abused me!"

"Actually, we aren't friends with anyone," Guude explained,"We are pirates. We don't have many friends, except each other." He unsheathed his sword and raised it.

"Guude! Stop!" Vechs yelled as Guude brought down the sword, and closed his eyes when he heard the girl scream.

"There we go." The captain said as the chains hit the floor.

"Oh, thank God." Vechs said when he opened his eyes and saw the girls head still attached to her body.

"Thank you... Stranger... who are you?" The girl asked,"My name is Aureylian, but you can call me Aurey."

"I'm Guude, these idiots over here are: Kurt, Beef, Pause, and Vechs." He said as he cut off what was left of the chains.

"Pleased to meet you." Said Vechs, and he held out his hand. She shook it.

"You too," She said, smiling,"Oh no, don't press that button!" The smile faded as the piston door shut.

"Dang it Beef! Now how are we going to get out of here?" Pause asked.

"The window isn't that high..." Aurey suggested.

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End of chapter one! Hope you guys enjoyed! Remember, my first fanfic, so please post what I did wrong in the comments, or what I did right, and you like. Thanks for reading!
PS: Like I said above, first one, I may not have cut it right, and I apologize in advance.

Current Mood: anxious
Current Location: Bed
Current Music: Bohemian Rhapsody

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From: (Anonymous)

Yay! More pirate AUs! Pretty good for a first fanfic.

Although, I wouldn't have tagged it as NSFW. First, the red NSFW is usually used for smut fics so only people 18+ years old can see them (or sneaky anons). Usually, you get less comments with this rating (for whatever reason. My guess is that people are too lazy to lie). The other option for NSFW, the one that has the pink logo when you post something, would probably have been better.

But I can't wait to see more from this!

From: (Anonymous)

Whoops, forgot to mention, this is Kappa being sneaky :3

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Perfectness! More pirate AUs FTW! I'm also very glad to see the veylian implications.

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A-sneak-sneak-sneak, A-sneak-sneak-sneak, A-sneaky-sneaky-sneak-sneak-sneak! :)

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gummy53

Woo, another Pirate AU!

Very good for a first fic, excited to see where it goes! :)

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lthomas224

Yeah, don't know why I did that .-. I will fix that in chapter two. I am glad you liked it!

Edited Date: Friday, July 11th, 2014 03:52 am (UTC)

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lthomas224

Thanks!

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lthomas224

Thanks!

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You're welcome!

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also, I just noticed your (updated? it was different earlier) profile pic! Go space!.... though it might get confusing for some people.....

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lthomas224

This was supposed to be my icon from the beginning, but I messed up on the editor and it ended up a line. I agree, go space! If the confusion gets bad, I'll change it.