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After an accident, Kurt can't remember anything. Including his boyfriend, Zisteau



This is something I wrote a long time ago, when I first started writing. I went through and re edited it and decided to post it here!
Enjoy!!


Kurt's POV

I slowly opened my eyes, blinking away the blurriness.

We're am I?

I start to turn my head, but stop when a splitting pain shoots through my head.

"Kurt your finally awake!" I hear someone say.

wait...... is he talking to me. Is my name Kurt. I can't seem to remember anything.

"Um..... who's Kurt?" I ask my voice sounding overly rough and strange.


"Um... you are?" the person replies, sounding very confused

"Who are you?" I ask the person.

"I'm Zisteau." The person, I guess is Zisteau, comes into view.

He is a decaying pig thing. What? I'm so confused.

"Um" I say

"Please tell me you remember me" Zisteau begs with tears threatening to run down his cheeks

"Um..... I don't know who you are...... have we meet before or something?" I say super confused

"Oh... um.... well... I'll be right back." Zisteau says he leaves the room with tears starting to run down his face.

I stare after him, thoroughly confused.

Zisteau's POV

I rush out of the room in tears, feeling thoroughly heart broken.

"Hey Doc" I call out, seeing him across the room.

"Hey Z, are you ok?" Doc replies in his thick German accent.

"No.... but Kurts awake."

"That's great!!! but, what's wrong?"

"He doesn't remember me. he doesn't even remember his own name. how can I deal with my boyfriend not knowing me." I say defeated

Doc walks over and hugs me. "It's ok Z, it's probably just minor amnesia. he will probably remember everything eventually."

"Hopefully" I manage around sobs

"I'm gonna go check on Kurt. Why don't you wait in my office"

I just nod, unable to speak.

Doc's POV

I watch as Z walks over towards my office. he looks totally defeated.

I send a message to Vechs using my Wrist Com

(Doc-D) (V-Vechs)

D: can you come to the hospital please Z is super upset

V: be there in like 5 minutes

D: k thanks

Vechs is the only other person beside Kurt that can calm Z down.

I walk into Kurts room.

"Hi Kurt, how are you?" I ask

"Um... hi. who are you.... and is my name Kurt, I'm kinda confused." Kurt says

"I'm Doc, and yes your name is Kurt."

"Ok..... who was that guy that was in here earlier?"

"That was Zisteau, he is a really close friend of yours" I say, leaving out the boyfriend part.

"Oh.... I don't remember him..... actually I don't remember anything really. where am I?"

"You are in mindcrack. You live here. you got in an accident, and you have amnesia."

"Oh, what kind if accident?"

"I'll answer your questions in a little while, but I need to check over your condition first."

"Ok"

I walk over and help Kurt sit up, he winces.

"What hurts?" I ask

"My head" Kurt replies

I check his blood pressure and everything else. he appears to be perfectly fine.

"Ok, Kurt, you appear to be perfectly fine, but you still have a minor concussion, which is causing the head pain. I'll just need to take an X-ray of your leg quickly and make sure everything is in order."

"Ok..."

I quickly type a message to Jsano on my wrist COM

(Doc-D) (Jsano-J)

D: come to Kurts room I need assistance.

J: is he awake?

D: yeah

J: k be there soon

Jsano enters the room moments later.

"Hi Kurt, how are you?" Jsano says

"Um... hi..... who are you." Kurt replies, looking confused

"Kurt, this is Jsano." I say sending Jsano a look.

"Ok Kurt, I want you to try to stand up"

"Ok"

Kurt's POV

I slowly started to move my legs to the side of the bed. I groan as this causes a terrible pain in my head. I put weight on my legs and they turn to jelly, causing me to fall, but luckily Doc and Jsano caught me.

"Ok we are going to move slowly."

"Ok" I say and slowly start taking steps forward.

my legs are really weak. I wonder what happened.

Vech's POV

I'm heading to the hospital. I wonder what it is this time. Z has been an emotional wreck since the accident.

I head to Doc's office when I enter the hospital knowing Z will be there.

"Hey Z, you ok?" I ask, already knowing the answer.

"No" Z responds his eyes puffy and red from crying.

"What's wrong?" I ask sitting beside him.

"Kurt doesn't remember me"

Wait Kurts awake that's amazing!

"He doesn't remember you?"

"Yeah, he doesn't even remember his own name"

"It's ok Z" I say hugging him

"No it's not. my boyfriend doesn't remember me. Us. what am I supposed to do?"

"I don't know Z, but everything will be ok, I promise."

This is bad. I can't believe Kurt can't remember anything.

"I'm gonna go talk to Doc, i'll be right back, ok?"

A nod is all I get from Z.

I head out and find Kurt being supported by Doc and Jsano.
Not a good time I guess I'll just talk to him later. I head back and sit with Z.

Doc's POV

I helped Kurt get on the table.
" Just relax and close your eyes, this will just take a second" I instruct Kurt, who Nods.

"Jsano go get Vechs so he can help you get Kurt back to the room please."

"On it." he says before leaving.

I take the X-rays.

"Vechs, you help Jsano and I will fill you in after I get done" I say when the door opens again.

"Ok" Vechs replies

They help Kurt stand up again. he groans in pain, which slightly worries me. when they leave I look over the X-rays. All the bones appear to have healed properly, which is really good. I head back to Kurt's room to tell him the good news.

"Kurt, the good news is that your leg is completely healed. But, you still have a concussion so you'll have to be careful."

"Ok" Kurt replies

"Vechs can you go back with Z? I will come talk to you two soon."

"Alright" Vechs says before leaving.

"So... what happened to me exactly?" Kurt asks

"Well, you were at Zisteau's base, the lens. Zisteau was showing you a new level he built and part of it wasn't lit up properly so a creeper spawned. Zisteau tried to kill it before it exploded, but couldn't. It blew up and you went flying over the edge of the lens plummeting a long way before landing on the ground. You hit your head in the process and broke multiple bones in your left leg." I explain.

A confused look sets on Kurt's face. "What is a creeper?"

"It is one if the mobs that spawn in the dark."

"Oh"

I turn to Jsano, who was still in the room. "Jsano, get Kurt some pain killers and get him comfy, I need to go talk to Z and Vechs."

"Got it." Jsano says.

I go to my office to find Z and Vechs on the coach.

"How are you doing Z?" I ask

"I don't know" Z murmurs

"Well, Kurt is doing pretty condition wise. The leg he broke when he fell is completely healed, but he still has a concussion. And, he definitely has amnesia, though I'm not sure how bad it actually is yet."

"Will he ever remember anything?" Z asks

"I'm not sure yet, but there is hope that he will." I say

"Ok" Z says, looking defeated.

"I actually want to discuss something with you Z"

Z nods

"I want you to stay at the observatory with Kurt until he knows his way around and his head is better, but you cannot treat him like your boyfriend, not yet at least."

"But..."

"I know you miss him Z, but we have to let him decide if he still loves you, we don't want to shock him too much."

"Fine.... I'll do it...."

"Thanks, he will probably be allowed to leave tomorrow."

"Ok"

Vechs, somehow, convinces Z to go home and sleep.

I head back and check on Kurt, who is fast asleep. I go back to my office and message Guude.

(Doc-D)(Guude-G)

D: Kurt is awake

G: OMG that is amazing! how is he?

D: well.. he has amnesia. I think it's pretty bad he didn't remember anything.

G: oh. how is Z?

D: an emotional wreck

G: figured

D: I don't think we should tell everyone else yet for Kurts sake.

G: probably smart, how is Kurt doing physically?

D: Hw still has a concussion, but beyond that he's fine.

G: I'm glad he isn't really hurt anymore

D: yeah, me too. By the way I want you to stop by tomorrow and talk to Kurt.

G: okay

Tomorrow is going to be interesting. I really hope Kurt remembers.

Date: Thursday, August 27th, 2015 01:57 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] yamina_chan
Greetings .o/
I've seen you post a lot of stories as of late, so I wanted to give you a little bit of advice:
Add a short summary/teaser before your cut. Something that will catch the attention of your possible readers.

"A new story!!!" holds no information about what this may or may not include. There is zero incentive for anyone to click on it, let alone read it.

It doesn't need to be much - in fact, it should not be too long, because that is coutner productive as well - but just something to hook your readers in.
Yes, I know these can be hard to come up with sometimes, because you don't want to spoil your own story, but curiosity is powerfull. If there's no reason to be curious, people will be less inclined to find out what your story is about.

Date: Friday, August 28th, 2015 05:55 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I really like this and want more.

-the lurkiest lurker

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