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Aureylian sees kindness in a friend, but can one person bring her back from where she went.


Prologue - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/826954.html#cutid1
Chapter 1 - http://mindcracklove.dreamwidth.org/834677.html#cutid1



Aureylian
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The first thing that I felt after I died was the pain. My neck was raw and felt like flames were climbing my burned red flesh. My whole body felt as if I had decided it would be a good idea to go swimming in the nether. I thought that pain went away when you died, that is why I was dead. I couldn't stand the pain of hate, yet I killed myself with pain.

As I opened my eyes things only got worse as I realized I was still in the room where I died. I was in my editing room facing my spare bed. Beyond the bed was my computer, on and glowing. A computer had changed my life for better and for worse. It made me a role model and broke me down, the haters got overwhelming and I couldn't deal. Although I couldn't see the individual comments on the screen, I knew what horrible things were written there and tears streamed down my face again. I started to shake, thinking I would be there forever and in too much pain to check. I felt hands running through my hair, and startled I whipped my head around. I was met by bright blue eyes, I gasped from the pain and the realization that I wasn't alone.

Is Vechs dead too. Where am I? Will I be here forever?

Suddenly I remembered everything from the night before. The roughness of the rope on my neck, the bright red blood, him jumping into my room, falling, his assuring words, his hands in my hair, him holding me until I fell asleep. Vechs saved my life. I wasn't sure how I felt about that, I had wanted to die. I wanted to disappear and remember everything that was good. Vechs told me good things, he retold amazing memories. He said that he cared and that I meant something. Maybe for now that was enough.

I was interrupted from my thought by Vechs voice.

"Aurey," Vechs whispered. His voice shook a little. I wonder what he's thinking? I wonder what he thinks I did this for? He seemed scared, the fearless mapmaker was scared. I laughed a little at the thought, but it must have came out a yelp because Vechs stiffened.

"Are you okay?", he whispered.

"I feel like shit, but I'm alive," I croaked, surprised by my own voice.

"Aurey you really need a healing potion, do you have any?"

"No."

After a moment Vechs said, "Can I ask Zisteau to bring some supplies, I won't say what happened I will just say it's important. He'll understand, I trust him."

"Sure"

I could tell he didn't want to leave my alone. I understood why though, who would leave a suicidal person alone in minecraft. He really cared, at least a little bit.

He dug out a small cellphone and typed in the chat / tell Zisteau

Dear Zisteau,
I have something really important I need you to do. Can you bring some supplies to the room in Aurey's base labeled editing.
- Some of my clothes
- Healing Potions
- Regen potions
- Food
- Wool and String
Please don't assume anything I will explain everything later.

I heard an anvil sound as it sent.

A few seconds later a reply came in.

Dear Vechs,
Sure I hope everything's okay.

"He is going to bring the stuff," Vechs said.

"Thanks," I whispered.

We sat in silence till we heard footsteps.



Sorry for the short update. Writing is hard. Lol

Date: Saturday, September 13th, 2014 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] gottaloverattatta
A+! Love it! All the dramas!

Date: Saturday, September 13th, 2014 03:53 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Very nice, I hope to see more. Yes, writing is hard lol.

-shaziru

Date: Saturday, September 13th, 2014 04:04 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thezombineer
I'll give you another derps in salad A+!

Now for the third to get all three of us. (I can explain the reference if you want)

Re: Thanks!

Date: Saturday, September 13th, 2014 02:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thezombineer
Alright. Lol

Gottaloverattatta, chemrepnacl (aka salt), and I compromise derps in salad. We tend to agree a lot when we comment (generally by saying the same thing). So, when I posted you had two out of three derps in salad agreeing. :)

Edit: and salt gave you an A+ also. 3/3 derps in salad agree. :P
Edited Date: Saturday, September 13th, 2014 02:58 pm (UTC)

Date: Saturday, September 13th, 2014 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] chemrepnacl
A+! Was great, though it was indeed slightly short xP I enjoyed this chapter. Also, could I request you to link to the first/previous chapter? Sometimes I forget what the story is about, terrible audience, I know, I apologise.

Re: Links

Date: Saturday, September 13th, 2014 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] chemrepnacl
Great, thank you! ^^

Date: Saturday, September 13th, 2014 10:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cooki_cutta
Even though I'm not a derp in salad, I still give ya an A+ :D

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