(General Fiction/W.I.P Pre-Alpha Stage) Yet another UHC fanfic + pitch dossier

[halcyonlioness]

Good lord, am I nervous.

First off, a thank you to the kind person (I won't drop names, but you know who you are) who pointed me this direction.  I am most appreciative. :D

Anyways, I come seeking consultation.  At the risk of sounding like a broken record (I reiterate this in the links below,) there's a lot of stuff I don't know, and I'd love to have a few 'experts' whom I can 'annoy' for information and assistance.  It's this particular fan community I wish to write this fanfic for, and I want to give this project due diligence.
 

Fanfic Pitch Dossier - Please read this first.  Warning: Massive Wall of Text (chances are, you guys can handle it. <3) Edit: Don't panic.  This is just preparation.  Thank you.

Work-In-Progress Document - [Warning: Unfinished Fanfic! There May Be Spoilers!]
Update: Prologue Beta is completed, more or less.  Please let me know what you think and don't be afraid to offer suggestions. Thank you for the help so far, guys! :D

So, I kindly ask that instead of tomatoes, please throw me a few bones to work with.  I look forward to your suggestions and help, and all of you have my thanks in advance.

-HalcyonLioness

Comments

[ampresand]

Well, Shree and Thejims you can automatically shift to the "detective" sector. They rarely participate in UHC. Jsano I think you can also shift to "detective", he's only been in the most recent UHC.

I think the reason Vechs would've been kicked out from Modera is for a similar reason to Doc - his experiments (mostly in weaponry and such), have gotten more and more dangerous and Modera began to worry that he'd become a problem. He recieved amnesty due to some friendships with some former Modera members. Maybe he helped Boo and Guude escape?

ETA: Oh yeah, and Ads is detective. He's another non-PvPer