(General Fiction/W.I.P Pre-Alpha Stage) Yet another UHC fanfic + pitch dossier

[halcyonlioness]

Good lord, am I nervous.

First off, a thank you to the kind person (I won't drop names, but you know who you are) who pointed me this direction.  I am most appreciative. :D

Anyways, I come seeking consultation.  At the risk of sounding like a broken record (I reiterate this in the links below,) there's a lot of stuff I don't know, and I'd love to have a few 'experts' whom I can 'annoy' for information and assistance.  It's this particular fan community I wish to write this fanfic for, and I want to give this project due diligence.
 

Fanfic Pitch Dossier - Please read this first.  Warning: Massive Wall of Text (chances are, you guys can handle it. <3) Edit: Don't panic.  This is just preparation.  Thank you.

Work-In-Progress Document - [Warning: Unfinished Fanfic! There May Be Spoilers!]
Update: Prologue Beta is completed, more or less.  Please let me know what you think and don't be afraid to offer suggestions. Thank you for the help so far, guys! :D

So, I kindly ask that instead of tomatoes, please throw me a few bones to work with.  I look forward to your suggestions and help, and all of you have my thanks in advance.

-HalcyonLioness

Comments

[celestepastore]

Great first chapter! Gives enough of your established world to let people know the score, but still leaves room for the mention of specific events as they become relevant. Also does a good job of establishing Guude's character, and setting the tone for the entire story. That is, if you plan on it being this action-packed through the entire thing.

Regardless, very promising start! Looking forward to more!

[halcyonlioness]

Thank you! I look forward to writing it for you guys! :D