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yamina-chan ([personal profile] yamina_chan) wrote in [community profile] mindcracklove 2016-08-01 11:17 pm (UTC)

Such a bizzare setting.

But that's a very interesting group of characters here; one that promises a a good variation when it comes to decisions, tasks and the solving of problems. - And interaction.

I think the story would have benefitted from a little more breething room at the start; to paint the scene, but I am curious where you plan on going with this. =)

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