I like how Guude is refered to as 'the mysterious southern man'. I loved this. I really like the concept of Nebris and Etho being perfect opposites. Powers and explanations seemed a little rushed, but it's a short story, which is inherently short and doesn't have time for really detailed explanations, and I can't do any better so... have cookies! (::) (::) (::) (::) (::) (::) (Also, kitten Etho is adorable. Fan art somebody somewhere please)
-Observing Anon