Date: Saturday, December 31st, 2016 10:41 pm (UTC)
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Okay, I did NOT see that coming XD
I was wondering what the supernatural tag was for when I saw this, but I definately didn't expect "ghost stuck in the vending machine due to death by said vending machine". XD
Points for that one!

(But seeing Pak flustered in any form is even more bizarre then the fact that he's stuck in that thing.)

“It’s like you’ve never even stolen a vending machine before." And you have, Nebris? XD I'm definately enjoying this unexpeteced turn of events and the humor you've added to the story as a result of it.
It's definately one of the more unusual stories I have seen, I know that much XD Perhaps not the most belivable, but entertaining none the less. You made me laugh throughout pretty much the entire thing.

But even accepting this sort of crazy turn of crazy events and my power of disbelief raised to maximum for what was clearly not meant to be a serious story, I HAVE to ask: why couldn't Pak ask for help sooner? Ask someone else?

Other then that I have no idea how to judge this one. I did enjoy the writing style at the beginning of this story, then I got kinda distracted by the events stopped paying attention to it. XD

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